As a popular saying "Precaution is better than cure". Although some people believe that government should use their funds for taking precautions rather than spending on medication and treatment. In my view, taking the right prevention measure can solve most of the health illness.
To begin with, there are various diseases that are caused by lack of cleanliness. It is important to maintain a high level of cleanliness in the country. With garbage spread across and bad sewage water, it becomes a breeding place for mosquitos which causes one of the most detrimental disease name malaria. Such kind of diseases can spread widely across individuals in a short span of time, which can be very detrimental to health and can also result in death of a person. In addition, in the recent times there are various countries that have been working towards cleanliness campaigns.
However, the government can create awareness and hygienic standards of living it will improve the health conditions. To illustrate, in my country the government has launched a "cleanliness campaign" where it is creating awareness among the people on the importance of keeping the nation learn. Funds should be used on conducing health seminars, which would educe the individuals.
To conclude, even though the government should spend some portion of its funds on the treatment and medication. However, it is vital to ensure that the public funds are being utilised to improve the hygiene levels and create awareness among citizens in order to prevent various diseases.
As
a popular saying
"
Precaution is better than cure
"
. Although
some
people
believe that
government
should
use
their funds for taking precautions
rather
than spending on medication and treatment. In my view, taking the right prevention measure can solve most of the
health
illness.
To
begin
with, there are various
diseases
that
are caused
by lack of
cleanliness
. It is
important
to maintain a high level of
cleanliness
in the country. With garbage spread across and
bad
sewage water, it becomes a breeding place for
mosquitos
which causes one of the most detrimental
disease
name malaria. Such kind of
diseases
can spread
widely
across individuals in a short span of time, which can be
very
detrimental to
health
and can
also
result in death of a person.
In addition
, in the recent times there are various countries that have been working towards
cleanliness
campaigns.
However
, the
government
can create awareness and hygienic standards of living it will
improve
the
health
conditions. To illustrate, in my country the
government
has launched a
"
cleanliness campaign
"
where it is creating awareness among the
people
on the importance of keeping the nation learn. Funds should be
used
on conducing
health
seminars, which would educe the individuals.
To conclude
,
even though
the
government
should spend
some
portion of its funds on the treatment and medication.
However
, it is vital to ensure that the public funds are being
utilised
to
improve
the hygiene levels and create awareness among citizens in order to
prevent
various
diseases
.
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