The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.6
The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. with this opinion? v. 6
Nowadays, some countries show a significant increase in the birth rate within the same family. This has led to a drastic surge in its population. In response to this phenomenon, and in order to take over on the number of children, many governments like china and India have adopted new regulations and stringent measures, by adding additional taxes on each family who will not abide by the number of children eligible.
It is generally agreed, that increasing in population, have several disadvantages. Firstly, it can affect the environment by increasing the carbon dioxide emission, as there will be more trucks and cars in the cities. Moreover, the deforestation will expand, as the governments will require a wide space for building new houses and buildings.
Secondly, the population growth could lead to high unemployment rate. In fact, currently, many people are facing difficulty to find a job. Many graduates are without work, as a result, some of them are obliged to immigrate and leave their countries just to find a suitable employment. Therefore, how it would be the situation if the number of people continue to increase in the upcoming years?
Thirdly, the increasing in population could influence the economy, as the governments are obliged to import more than exporting, this will have significant impact on the country development.
In the end, I think adding taxes, is an extraordinary method to deter parents from giving new birth. It is the only and the most efficient way for the government to make people to put up with new regulations.
Nowadays,
some
countries
show
a significant increase in the birth rate within the same family. This has led to a drastic surge in its
population
. In response to this phenomenon, and in order to take over on the number of children,
many
governments
like
china
and India have adopted
new
regulations and stringent measures, by adding additional taxes on each family who will not abide by the number of children eligible.
It is
generally
agreed
, that increasing in
population
, have several disadvantages.
Firstly
, it can affect the environment by increasing the carbon dioxide emission, as there will be more trucks and cars in the cities.
Moreover
, the deforestation will expand, as the
governments
will require a wide space for building
new
houses
and buildings.
Secondly
, the
population
growth could lead to high unemployment rate. In fact,
currently
,
many
people
are facing difficulty to find a job.
Many
graduates are without work,
as a result
,
some
of them
are obliged
to immigrate and
leave
their countries
just
to find a suitable employment.
Therefore
, how it would be the situation if the number of
people
continue to increase in the upcoming years?
Thirdly
, the increasing in
population
could influence the economy, as the
governments
are obliged
to import more than exporting, this will have significant impact on the country development.
In the
end
, I
think
adding taxes, is an extraordinary method to deter parents from giving
new
birth. It is the
only
and the most efficient way for the
government
to
make
people
to put up with
new
regulations.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes