Some people feel that entertainers (e. g. films stars, pop musicians or sports starts) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Wich other types of job should be highly paid v.6
Some people feel that entertainers (e. g. films stars, pop musicians or sports starts) are paid too much money. Wich other types of job should be highly paid v. 6
A group of population think that famous entertainers are very well paid. Therefore, they believe that is better that other sorts of jobs ought have a high salary. However I agree with the stars can earn a great amount of money, because we live in a capitalistic world where the market is regulated by customers.
I feel that many people disagree with the a singer or a sports of high performance wins big incomes, due to they think that the job that a famous can do is simple and do not have a great contribution to society. For this reason, it is commonly thought that other kinds of careers should receive a better salary which I think too. For example, teachers must have a better remuneration, since they are the base of the knowledge in a society.
On the other hand, I consider that the famous stars do not have the blame of obtaining enormous remunerations. In the case of Cristiano Ronaldo, for instance, he is paying for his job as a soccer player and for his work in publicity as well. So, his fans help that the Portuguese can be able to have that wealth Ergo, perhaps should be more unfair that celebrity’s bosses do not paid which they have to win.
In conclusion, the discussion about whether is unfair that entertainers can achieve too much wealth always will be. Nevertheless, in my opinion, this is a consequent of the market, which can pay for those talents that is not the majority of the population, because a Messi or a Britney Spears can birth maybe each 40 years.
A group of population
think
that
famous
entertainers are
very
well paid.
Therefore
, they believe
that is
better that other sorts of jobs
ought have
a high salary.
However
I
agree
with the stars can earn a great amount of money,
because
we
live
in a capitalistic world where the market
is regulated
by customers.
I feel that
many
people
disagree with
the a
singer or
a sports
of high performance wins
big
incomes, due to they
think
that the job that a
famous
can do is simple and do not have a great contribution to society.
For this reason
, it is
commonly
thought
that other kinds of careers should receive a better salary which I
think
too.
For example
, teachers
must
have a better remuneration, since they are the base of the knowledge in a society.
On the other hand
, I consider that the
famous
stars do not have the blame of obtaining enormous remunerations. In the case of Cristiano Ronaldo,
for instance
, he is paying for his job as a soccer player and for his work in publicity
as well
.
So
, his fans
help
that the Portuguese can be able to have that wealth Ergo, perhaps should be more unfair that celebrity’s bosses do not paid which they
have to
win.
In conclusion
, the discussion about whether is unfair that entertainers can achieve too much wealth always will be.
Nevertheless
, in my opinion, this is a consequent of the market, which can pay for those talents
that is
not the majority of the population,
because
a Messi or a Britney Spears can birth maybe each 40 years.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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