In the past twenty years, women had experienced a change in their status in the society. Here was a change in the mindset of people that women should receive the same treat and there should be a balance between the status and position of males and females in the society. Because of this change, women can start to work in the society. However, there is an accusation that women are the culprits that cause many social problems to occur which are believed to have been done by young people as they are not at home taking care of their children.
First and foremost, I do not agree to the argument as the occurrence of the problems was not the responsibility of women alone. The children who involved in crimes are perhaps because they want to attract attention from their parents. I have to emphasise the importance of the way the parents educate their children as this will affect the behaviour of their children. Many children who are caught for committing juvenile delinquency such as vandalism have been asked of their reasons to do so. It is surprising that most of the answers were they want their parents to care for them and show their love. Thus, even if the mothers are not working and stay at home taking care of their children, there is still possibility for juvenile delinquency to occur as what the children want is the love from their parents. They want their parents to devote some time to spend with them. It is therefore not fair to point the finger to women who are working.
In addition, in my opinion, I feel that the responsibility and role played by the schools are very important in preventing the problems faced by young people. When children are learning in school, teachers shall pay attention to their students and monitor as many students as they can. For instance, if a student always plays truant, teacher should inform parents as this is one of the signals that shows the student might involve in juvenile delinquency. Besides, it is important that schools educate children on the impact of committing crimes so that the intimidate effects of the punishments could prevent juvenile delinquency.
Although there might be some people think that women have responsibilities in taking care of their children, we shall not forget that there are two important characters in the family which are the father and the mother. Some people believe that children who commit crime are from incomplete families. Nonetheless, we have to admit mothers from incomplete families have many tasks to do besides caring for their children. Therefore, counsellors in the school should pay attention to those children come from incomplete family.
To sum up, mother shall not be the only one to blame for not showing care to their children when juvenile delinquency occurs. Other parties should give helps to mothers in taking care of the children. It is important for children to have the education on the impacts of committing crimes and teach them to be more rational in everything they do.
In the past twenty years,
women
had experienced a
change
in their status in the society. Here was a
change
in the mindset of
people
that
women
should receive the same treat and there should be a balance between the status and position of males and females in the society.
Because of this
change
,
women
can
start
to work in the society.
However
, there is an accusation that
women
are the culprits that cause
many
social problems to occur which
are believed
to have
been done
by young
people
as they are not at home taking
care
of their children.
First
and foremost, I do not
agree
to the argument as the occurrence of the problems was not the responsibility of
women
alone. The
children
who
involved in
crimes
are perhaps
because
they
want
to attract attention from their
parents
. I
have to
emphasise
the importance of the way the
parents
educate their
children
as this will affect the
behaviour
of their
children
.
Many
children
who
are caught
for committing
juvenile
delinquency
such as vandalism have
been asked
of their reasons to do
so
. It is surprising that most of the answers were they
want
their
parents
to
care
for them and
show
their
love
.
Thus
, even if the mothers are not working and stay at home taking
care
of their
children
, there is
still
possibility for
juvenile
delinquency
to occur as what the
children
want
is the
love
from their
parents
. They
want
their
parents
to devote
some
time to spend with them. It is
therefore
not
fair
to point the finger to
women
who
are working.
In addition
, in my opinion, I feel that the responsibility and role played by the
schools
are
very
important
in preventing the problems faced by young
people
. When
children
are learning in
school
, teachers shall pay attention to their
students
and monitor as
many
students
as they can.
For instance
, if a
student
always plays truant, teacher should inform
parents
as this is one of the signals that
shows
the
student
might involve in
juvenile
delinquency
.
Besides
, it is
important
that
schools
educate
children
on the impact of committing
crimes
so
that
the intimidate
effects of the punishments could
prevent
juvenile
delinquency.
Although there might be
some
people
think
that
women
have responsibilities in taking
care
of their
children
, we shall not forget that there are two
important
characters in the family which are the father and the
mother
.
Some
people
believe that
children
who
commit
crime
are from incomplete families. Nonetheless, we
have to
admit mothers from incomplete families have
many
tasks to do
besides
caring for their
children
.
Therefore
,
counsellors
in the
school
should pay attention to those
children
come
from incomplete family.
To sum up,
mother
shall not be the
only
one to blame for not showing
care
to their
children
when
juvenile
delinquency
occurs. Other parties should give
helps
to mothers in taking
care
of the
children
. It is
important
for
children
to have the education on the impacts of committing
crimes
and teach them to be more rational in everything they do.