It is argued that children should be given more knowledge about health and wellness in schools. This essay completely agrees with that statement because children follow all the rules and regulations of the school and schools can provide all the necessary information to students of the same age group at the same time.
Firstly, students abide by the rules of the school. This is because they are afraid to face the punishment they may get if they do not follow the rules. Because of this, most of the students remain sincere and do what they are told to do. If children are provided with the information and are given certain tasks to perform at school to enhance their health and wellness than they would do them as they would be afraid to be disciplined. For example, according to a survey conducted by The Hindustan Times on school-going children, it was found that 90 % students do their homework as they are scared of being punished.
Additionally, children of the same age group can be provided with information related to health and wellness together as they will be in the same class. Owing to the increase in depression and less knowledge about menstruation in teenage girls, it is necessary to educate them about this. For example, as a part of government initiative in India, only girls studying in 8th standard of a government school were given education about menstruation.
In conclusion, schools should provide students with information related to their health and happiness as they are fearful to be punished and education which can be provided to specific age groups can be delivered easily.
It
is argued
that
children
should be
given
more knowledge about
health
and wellness in
schools
. This essay completely
agrees
with that statement
because
children
follow all the
rules
and regulations of the
school
and
schools
can provide all the necessary
information
to
students
of the same age group at the same time.
Firstly
,
students
abide by the
rules
of the
school
. This is
because
they are afraid to face the punishment they may
get
if they do not follow the
rules
.
Because of this
, most of the
students
remain sincere and do what they are
told
to do. If
children
are provided
with the
information
and are
given
certain tasks to perform at
school
to enhance their
health
and wellness than they would do them as they would be afraid to
be disciplined
.
For example
, according to a survey conducted by The Hindustan Times on school-going
children
, it
was found
that 90 %
students
do their homework as they
are scared
of
being punished
.
Additionally
,
children
of the same age group can
be provided
with
information
related to
health
and wellness together as they will be in the same
class
. Owing to the increase in depression and less knowledge about menstruation in teenage girls, it is necessary to educate them about this.
For example
, as a part of
government
initiative in India,
only
girls studying in 8th standard of a
government
school
were
given
education about menstruation.
In conclusion
,
schools
should provide
students
with
information
related to their
health
and happiness as they are fearful to
be punished
and education which can
be provided
to specific age groups can
be delivered
easily
.
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