There have been ongoing debates whether old aged masses important for the society or not. some people think aged people create a enormous problem to the country. However, few other believe older group has paramount to the society. While this approach can be proved older masses beneficial in some countries. I will discuss both views in the subsequent paragraph.
Discussing the first view, the foremost last past few decades some countries face overlapping population which create number of problems for the nation such as lack of food, water, job opportunities and so on. Secondly, the government do not able to handle situation when country faced economy problem.
On the flip side, the supporters of the letter view favours elders has paramount importance for society as well as family. Older people are bone of society and family because they helps to take decision and teaches how to tackle different situations in their life. Moreover, aged person is a lock of their house. For instance, if all family members are worker then they take care their house as well as little children and teach moral values of their children.
To conclude and give my opinion, againg person is increasing day by day no doubt population create many people while government take relevant steps for giving facilities.
There have been ongoing debates whether
old
aged masses
important
for the
society
or not.
some
people
think
aged
people
create
a
enormous problem to the
country
.
However
, few
other
believe older group has paramount to the
society
.
While
this approach can
be proved
older masses beneficial in
some
countries
. I will discuss both views in the subsequent paragraph.
Discussing the
first
view, the foremost last past few decades
some
countries
face overlapping population which create number of problems for the nation such as lack of food, water, job opportunities and
so
on.
Secondly
, the
government
do not able to handle situation when
country
faced economy problem.
On the flip side, the supporters of the letter view
favours
elders has paramount importance for
society
as well
as family. Older
people
are bone of
society
and family
because
they
helps
to take decision and teaches how to tackle
different
situations in their life.
Moreover
, aged person is a lock of their
house
.
For instance
, if all family members are worker then they take care their
house
as well
as
little
children and teach moral values of their children.
To conclude
and give my opinion,
againg
person is increasing day by day no doubt population create
many
people
while
government
take relevant steps for giving facilities.
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