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Only formal examination, written or practical can give a clear picture of students true knowledge and ability at university level. Continue assessment like course work and project are poor measures of student ability. How far do you agree with this latt v.1

Only formal examination, written or practical can give a clear picture of students true knowledge and ability at university level. Continue assessment like course work and project are poor measures of student ability. How far do you agree with this latt v. 1
Nowadays, students have been facing number of tasks while their studies at schools and colleges for better knowledge and academic skills. Although all kinds of examinations and practical things can provide some talent to pupils, continue assessment of various project work and related tasks would really accelerate extra ability to many students. I strongly agree with this view and I will discuss the main reasons. To begin with, written and practical type practical can judge comprehensive ability and knowledge to students. Nevertheless, frequent project and course work certainly improve more confident to the students and it leads to a creative mind among them. When a student begin his or her project work in university, they will take this as a challenge and work hard for a better outcome. In this circumstances, it will improve their success level. Therefore, it is clear that this kind of tasks have more benefit than that of paper type exam. Another justification is that course work always can provide more interesting and stress free environment, whereas usual exams often put pressure on students so that some times they may not perform well according to their potential. For example, collecting data by themselves can make them more relax and pleasure and it can be lead them to do research and discover many things around them. Also, today, exam fear a big concern among students because they are forced to study at the end of every term but here they may not have any stiff target. Consequently, it truly develop confidence and self satisfaction among students especially someone who do history related topics. To sum up, course work and project have improved not only the confidence level but it can also ensure self satisfaction between them rather than study from printed books.
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students
have been facing number of tasks while their studies at schools and colleges for better knowledge and academic
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skills
. Although all kinds of examinations and practical things can provide
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some
talent to pupils, continue assessment of various
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project
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work
and related tasks would
really
accelerate extra ability to
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many
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students
. I
strongly
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agree
with this view and I will discuss the main reasons.

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begin
with, written and practical type practical can judge comprehensive ability and knowledge to
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students
.
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, frequent
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project
and course
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work
certainly
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improve
more confident to the
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students
and it leads to a creative mind among them. When a
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student
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begin
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his or her
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project
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work
in university, they will take this as a challenge and
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work
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hard
for a better outcome. In
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this
circumstances, it will
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improve
their success level.
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, it is
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clear
that this kind of tasks have more benefit than that of paper type exam.

Another justification is that course
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can provide more interesting and
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stress
free environment, whereas usual exams
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often
put pressure on
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students
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so
that
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some
times they may not perform well according to their potential.
For example
, collecting data by themselves can
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make
them more relax and pleasure and it can be lead them to do research and discover
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many
things around them.
Also
,
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today
, exam fear a
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big
concern among
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students
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because
they
are forced
to study at the
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end
of every term
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but
here they may not have any stiff target.
Consequently
, it
truly
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develop
confidence and
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self satisfaction
among
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students
especially
someone who do history related topics.

To sum up, course
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work
and
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project
have
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improved
not
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only
the confidence level
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but
it can
also
ensure
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self satisfaction
between them
rather
than study from printed books.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Only formal examination, written or practical can give a clear picture of students true knowledge and ability at university level. Continue assessment like course work and project are poor measures of student ability. How far do you agree with this latt v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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