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The noise levels have impacted the quality of our life, what are the causes of this problem and what should be done to solve it. v.1

The noise levels have impacted the quality of our life, what are the causes of this problem and what should be done to solve it. v. 1
The environment today is threatened by many factors such as air pollution, noise pollution and so on. However, among them most concerning is the noise pollution. In this essay, we will discuss how population growth and technology advances have affected this issue. To tackle this, the government can play the major role by setting rules and regulations in the country. To begin with, there are various reasons for the increase in the noise pollution. One main cause is the ever-increasing population of the world which leads to the excessive usage of vehicles for travelling. This results in the traffic congestion and thereby, forces individuals to utilise honking system, which adds to the noise. Besides these, with the advances in the technology, many new systems are developed and excessive usage of these systems can increase the noise levels. Sound systems, loudspeakers and random seminars on roads are some other reasons which are increasing the noise pollution. In order to minimise the problem related to the noise, certain measures can be taken by the elected authority. First of all, they can concentrate on improving public transportation in such a way that it will reduce down the usage of private cars and more number of people will start relying on public transit. In addition to this, usage of noise reduction systems should be enforced to companies involved in the production of new products. Thus, the government can put efforts to reduce noise pollution for upgrading the standard of society. Apart from the government’s involvement in solving this urgent issue, the awareness among much people must be increased. They should know the harmfulness and long terms effects of increased noise level and they should spontaneously volunteer to reduce this level. Thus, it is clear that increase in the usage of cars and various modern systems have contributed to the increase in the sound levels. It is hoped that legal entity will educate the society about the harms caused by noise pollution and ways to avoid this.
The environment
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today
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by
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many
factors such as air
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pollution
,
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noise
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pollution
and
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so
on.
However
, among them most concerning is the
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noise
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pollution
. In this essay, we will discuss how population growth and technology advances have
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affected
this issue. To tackle this, the
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government
can play the major role by setting
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rules
and regulations in the country.

To
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begin
with, there are various reasons for the
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increase
in the
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noise
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pollution
. One main cause is the ever-increasing population of the world which leads to the excessive
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usage
of vehicles for travelling. This results in the traffic congestion and thereby, forces individuals to
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utilise
honking
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system
, which
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adds
to the
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noise
.
Besides
these, with the advances in the technology,
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many
new
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systems
are developed
and excessive
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usage
of these
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systems
can
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increase
the
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noise
levels. Sound
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systems
, loudspeakers and random seminars on roads are
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some
other reasons which are increasing the
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noise
pollution.

In order to
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minimise
the problem related to the
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noise
, certain measures can
be taken
by the elected authority.
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First of all
, they can concentrate on improving public transportation in such a way that it will
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reduce
down the
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usage
of private cars and more number of
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people
will
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start
relying on public transit.
In addition
to this,
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usage
of
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noise
reduction
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systems
should
be enforced
to
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companies
involved in the production of new products.
Thus
, the
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government
can put efforts to
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reduce
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noise
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pollution
for upgrading the standard of society. Apart from the
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government
’s involvement in solving this urgent issue, the awareness among much
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people
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must
be increased
. They should know the harmfulness and long terms effects of increased
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noise
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level and
they should
spontaneously
volunteer to
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reduce
this level.

Thus
, it is
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clear
that
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increase
in the
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usage
of cars and various modern
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systems
have contributed to the
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increase
in the sound levels. It
is hoped
that legal entity will educate the society about the harms caused by
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noise
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pollution
and ways to avoid this.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay The noise levels have impacted the quality of our life, what are the causes of this problem and what should be done to solve it. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
332 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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