It is sometimes argued that the appearance of social media tends to be a negative impact on people’s lifestyle. While I agree with this point of view, I do not believe that mass media only brings us disadvantages.
To begin with, there are some evidences illustrating the drawbacks of news media. On the first level of influence, it will be a deadly weapon since there are numerous fake news which will directly affect to private life of people, especially celebraties. For example, some singers in Korean are depression because of the pressure of media and dangerously, some of them choose the death. Secondly, some media contents are not suitable for children such as violence or prostitution and influence easily in children’s think and behaviour. Therefore, children’s access to such content can be difficult should be limited.
However, the aforementioned reasons can be seen as oposite angle. Firstly, news media keep people not to be out-of-date. Due to the development of medias, people can easily access to the world at home such as current affairs, weather forecast… so distance is not a barrier. The second benefit is great in promoting mass consumer products because of the increase in advertisements in television and radio. As a result, this can in turn acceleration sales of the product.
In conclusion, the development of news media has both beneficial and detrimental effects in people’s life.
It is
sometimes
argued that the appearance of social
media
tends to be a
negative
impact on
people’s
lifestyle. While I
agree
with this point of view, I do not believe that mass
media
only
brings us disadvantages.
To
begin
with, there are
some
evidences illustrating the drawbacks of
news
media
. On the
first
level of influence, it will be a deadly weapon since there are numerous fake
news
which will
directly
affect to private life of
people
,
especially
celebraties
.
For example
,
some
singers in Korean are depression
because
of the pressure of
media
and
dangerously
,
some
of them choose the death.
Secondly
,
some
media
contents are not suitable for children such as violence or prostitution and influence
easily
in children’s
think
and
behaviour
.
Therefore
, children’s access to such content can be difficult should
be limited
.
However
, the aforementioned reasons can be
seen
as
oposite
angle.
Firstly
,
news
media
keep
people
not to be out-of-date. Due to the development of
medias
,
people
can
easily
access to the world at home such as
current
affairs, weather forecast…
so
distance is not a barrier. The second benefit is great in promoting mass consumer products
because
of the increase in advertisements in television and radio.
As a result
, this can in turn acceleration sales of the product.
In conclusion
, the development of
news
media
has both beneficial and detrimental effects in
people’s
life.
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