There has been an evolution in the advertisement industry ever since few sports became very popular entertainment across the globe. I firmly agree that these days, products are being marketed without real requirements of the consumers. In this essay, I will describe about the different strategies that the companies follow to advertise goods.
Firstly, consumers tend to fall for advertising gimmick. Companies are utilizing current popular events to attract the buyers. For example, IPL is a very famous and well known cricket tournament across the world. There will be frequent advertisements broadcasted in the television which will be viewed by millions of people. There are so many goods in the market which are useless and may cause harm to the consumers. Organizations will try to pitch in these kind of items during such popular games to grab consumers attention and will achieve high profit margins.
Secondly, there are many local and online stores offering products for cheaper prices. It is often found that they are either not sold for a long time since stocked up or has a very low quality. They always make false promotions and fake discounts to invite people to buy from them. For example, many Indian apparel outlets offer huge discounts up to 50 percent during certain time of the year where people turn up in large numbers. On the other hand, these stores are removing original labels with actual amount and sticking fake labels with higher price. People do easily fall for these cheap tricks and often buy lots of goods without necessity.
To conclude, the actual needs of society should be considered while manufacturing and marketing a product. Companies shouldn't misuse trending advertising mediums such as print and digital to magnify their goods. Buyers should also be aware of these cheap tricks and should sensibly purchase their needy items. 
There has been an evolution in the advertisement industry ever since few sports became  
very
 popular entertainment across the globe. I  
firmly
  agree
 that these days, products are  
being marketed
 without real requirements of the  
consumers
. In this essay, I will  
describe
 about the  
different
 strategies that the  
companies
 follow to advertise  
goods
. 
Firstly
,  
consumers
 tend to fall for advertising gimmick.  
Companies
 are utilizing  
current
 popular  
events
 to attract the buyers.  
For example
,  
IPL
 is a  
very
  famous
 and well known cricket tournament across the world. There will be frequent advertisements broadcasted  
in the television
 which will  
be viewed
 by millions of  
people
. There are  
so
  many
  goods
 in the market which are useless and may cause harm to the  
consumers
. Organizations will try to pitch in  
these kind
 of items during such popular games to grab  
consumers
 attention and will achieve high profit margins. 
Secondly
, there are  
many
 local and online stores offering products for cheaper prices. It is  
often
 found that they are either not sold for a long time since stocked up or has a  
very
 low quality. They always  
make
 false promotions and fake discounts to invite  
people
 to  
buy
 from them.  
For example
,  
many
 Indian apparel outlets offer huge discounts up to 50 percent during certain time of the  
year where
  people
 turn up in large numbers.  
On the other hand
, these stores are removing original labels with actual amount and sticking fake labels with higher price.  
People
 do  
easily
 fall for these  
cheap
 tricks and  
often
  buy
 lots of  
goods
 without necessity. 
To conclude
, the actual needs of society should  
be considered
 while manufacturing and marketing a product.  
Companies
 shouldn't misuse trending advertising mediums such as print and digital to magnify their  
goods
. Buyers should  
also
 be aware of these  
cheap
 tricks and should  
sensibly
  purchase
 their needy items. 
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