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research in the field of science and technology is of utmost significance as it leads to breakthrough inventions. It os highly debatable issue whether government should do the spending on scientific research purposes or private companies should take the i v.1

research in the field of science and technology is of utmost significance as it leads to breakthrough inventions. It os highly debatable issue whether government should do the spending on scientific research purposes or private companies should take the i v. 1
research in the field of science and technology is of utmost significance as it leads to breakthrough inventions. It os highly debatable issue whether government should do the spending on scientific research purposes or private companies should take the initiative. I partially agree with the aforesaid notion and believe that investment should be done equally by both. To begin with, the government’s role in maintaining the science field is most crucial. Whatever discovery is made in this field directly proportionates to the regime. Secondly, the nation bags recognition internationally and the praise is all what comes to the government. Thirdly, any lead made in science affects the country and its population. For instance, the weather forecasts assist the agricultural nations to make appropriate arrangements for the crops. so, as it is for the betterment of a country as a whole, the governments should happily take the responsibility of managing and funding research in science field. On the contrary, it would not be wrong to say that highly profiteering private companies should also contribute towards scientific research. The reason being that some developing nations may not have enough national capital to cope with the finances so here if any assistance is provided by the non-public set-ups it would be always more than welcome. Additionally, if the burden of the government is eased off a little then the national budget would be better spent on the healthcare and educational needs of the masses. Furthermore, a combined effort would lead to more close ties within the nation as it would create a sense of unity among the nation rulers and the private owners. To encapsulate, the research and experiment field is one of the most important and expensive area that a country needs to spend on so it should be done through public and private collaboration.
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and technology is of utmost significance as it leads to breakthrough inventions.
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highly
debatable issue whether
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should do the spending on scientific
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purposes or
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private
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companies
should take the initiative. I
partially
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with the aforesaid notion and believe that investment should
be done
equally
by both.

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with, the
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government’s
role in maintaining the
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science
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field
is most crucial. Whatever discovery
is made
in this
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field
directly
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proportionates
to the regime.
Secondly
, the
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nation
bags recognition
internationally
and the praise is all what
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comes
to the
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government
.
Thirdly
, any lead made in
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science
affects the country and its population.
For instance
, the weather forecasts assist the agricultural
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nations
to
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make
appropriate arrangements for the crops.
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so
, as it is for the betterment of a country as a whole, the
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governments
should
happily
take the responsibility of managing and funding
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research
in
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science
field.

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, it would not be
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wrong
to say that
highly
profiteering
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private
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companies
should
also
contribute towards scientific
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research
. The reason being that
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some
developing
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nations
may not have
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enough
national capital to cope with the finances
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so
here if any assistance
is provided
by the non-public set-ups it would be always more than welcome.
Additionally
, if the burden of the
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government
is
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eased
off a
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little
then the national budget would be better spent on the healthcare and educational needs of the masses.
Furthermore
, a combined effort would lead to more close ties within the
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nation
as it would create a sense of unity among the
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nation
rulers and the
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private
owners.

To encapsulate, the
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research
and experiment
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field
is one of the most
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important
and expensive area that a country needs to spend on
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so
it should
be done
through public and
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private
collaboration.
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27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay research in the field of science and technology is of utmost significance as it leads to breakthrough inventions. It os highly debatable issue whether government should do the spending on scientific research purposes or private companies should take the i v. 1

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4 paragraphs
303 words
6.0
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