The maps below show exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.1
The maps below show exports of rubber ducks from 2013 to 2017.
A standard age to conclude definitely the labour period (65 for example) is considered unfair for certain demographics of society, because they think that some employeers have the right to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. However, I do not agree with that, for the reason that the health has had several advances in the last two decades. Hence, a person with is 65 years still looks like very good and they can be a great help to the workplace.
Nowadays, population in developed countries is majority elder. Therefore, governments spend many resources to support the health of this group of individuals. The retirement is not always a good option for who have spent their entire life in a workplace, rather this situation could create more psychological problems. In fact, the end of a labour era, cause in some cases depressions, as a result that these workers do not know what doing with their time, because their life was the job.
In my opinion, all kinds of workers, independent of their gender, ought have the same pension. For instance, currently in Chile, the individuals that belong to the army have earlier retire. This situation is unfair, because I consider that these sorts of jobs do not have a great contribution to society. Another case is the women, they in this country finish their labour world with 60 years, which is not fair, because nowadays we fight for the equality for men and women, so the correct is that everyone would have their pension at the same age.
In conclusion, a group of the population considers that retirement should be different for some works. But I do not agree for the reason that the work is part essential of the one person, so if decrease the age, probably, would be a economic problem for the government and perhaps a trouble for our health.
A standard age
to conclude
definitely the
labour
period (65
for example
)
is considered
unfair for certain demographics of society,
because
they
think
that
some
employeers
have the right to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.
However
, I do not
agree
with that, for the reason that the health has had several advances in the last two decades.
Hence
, a person with is 65 years
still
looks like
very
good and
they can be a great
help
to the workplace.
Nowadays, population in
developed countries
is majority elder.
Therefore
,
governments
spend
many
resources to support the health of this group of individuals. The retirement is not always a
good
option for
who
have spent their entire life in a workplace,
rather
this situation could create more psychological problems. In fact, the
end
of a
labour
era, cause in
some
cases depressions,
as a result
that these workers do not know what doing with their time,
because
their life was the job.
In my opinion, all kinds of workers, independent of their gender,
ought have
the same pension.
For instance
,
currently
in Chile, the individuals that belong to the army have earlier
retire
. This situation is unfair,
because
I consider that these sorts of jobs do not have a great contribution to society. Another case is the women, they in this country finish their
labour
world with 60 years, which is not
fair
,
because
nowadays we fight for the equality for
men
and women,
so
the correct is that everyone would have their pension at the same age.
In conclusion
, a group of the population considers that retirement should be
different
for
some
works.
But
I do not
agree
for the reason that the work is part essential of the one person,
so
if decrease the age,
probably
, would be
a
economic problem for the
government
and perhaps a trouble for our health.
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