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The chart below gives information about southland main exports in 2000, 20. . . . and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant. (20. . . for test purposes, use and refer t v.1

The chart below gives information about southland main exports in 2000, 20. . . . and future projections for 2025.
The supplied histogram delineates the information about, main exports in 2000, 2018 and future projections of 2025 in southland. The data is calibrated in billions, which is clearly and coherently represented. To comments with, It is seen that, in a 2000 maximum exports were of international tourism with quantity of 8 billion and minimum exporting was of meat products which was 2 billion less then International tourism. Further more, in the current year 2018, dairy products are highly exported with 19. 9 billion, while meat products are less exported with quantity of 5. 5 billion approximately. Probing ahead, It is seen that, in the future projection of 2025 exporting of international tourism and dairy products will be with 10 billion and 9. 5 billion respectively and meat products will be 4 billion less than international tourism. Overall, it is evident that, meat products are all products which are exported least as compared to other products as they are not exported more than the quantity of 6 billion during all the given years in southland' s main exportation.
The supplied histogram delineates the information about, main exports in 2000, 2018 and future projections of 2025 in
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southland
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billions
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that, in a 2000 maximum exports were of
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international
tourism with quantity of 8
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billion
and minimum exporting was of
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meat
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products
which was 2
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billion
less
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then
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International
tourism.
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more, in the
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current
year 2018, dairy
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products
are
highly
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exported
with 19. 9
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billion
, while
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meat
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products
are less
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exported
with quantity of 5. 5
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billion
approximately.

Probing ahead, It is
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seen
that, in the future projection of 2025 exporting of
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international
tourism and dairy
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products
will be with 10
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billion
and 9. 5
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billion
respectively
and
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meat
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products
will be 4
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billion
less than
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international
tourism.

Overall
, it is evident that,
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meat
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products
are all
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products
which are
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exported
least as compared to other
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products
as they are not
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exported
more than the quantity of 6
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billion
during all the
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given
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3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The chart below gives information about southland main exports in 2000, 20. . . . and future projections for 2025.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
177 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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