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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.194

Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 194
I totally agree with that statement. Of course, so many ways to learn English we have. Everybody is different and it is your choice what kind of way to use learning English. Unfortunately, it is a certain condition to want to be more efficient and create in life. If we ask that question to others, I think most of them would say to choose not the best way. Maybe it is true, but I want to give some reasons for the advantages of learning with a native tutor. The first one is to be a very important foreign environment, especially people who speak in English every day. If you live in a native speaker of the province, it is so easy to learn English. Because you have already conditioned as a situation where you could learn English. If you want to buy something in a shop, you have to speak with a seller to understand and buy something. Foreign countries and people can improve your English every skill. Additionally, you can see a lot of new things, culture, and foods, It seems surprising for you. Maybe you live in your country, but your environment is the English zone. It is full of supporting learning English with a native teacher. Of course, when we have a native coach or native country, we spent a lot of money. But Mongolians say that you can develop in your capacity, you can earn more money immediately. Maybe your ability will become your bright future life. If you have a native teacher to learn, you can learn more fluently than others. You can learn to be the best one in your country. Then you may teach others. It is possible because you have the ability and knowledge. Most people do not know about asset skill is the most important in their career. Truly, to learn English with a native teacher or not is so complicated and need more effort and sweat. Then this ability will be reached to you a billionaire in the world. Most of the well-known people say they are so many efforts to do one thing. If you want to be a person with an ability in your profession, you should learn English without wasting time or immediately. So, for saving your own time, I want to advise and say to learn English with a native teacher. Finally, the most important thing is the result.
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learn
English we have. Everybody is
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different
and it is your choice what kind of way to
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use
learning English. Unfortunately, it is a certain condition to
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want
to be more efficient and create in life.

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think
most of them would say to choose not the best way. Maybe it is true,
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but
I
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want
to give
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some
reasons for the advantages of learning with a
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native
tutor.

The
first
one is to be a
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very
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important
foreign environment,
especially
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people
who speak in English every day. If you
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live
in a
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native
speaker of the province, it is
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so
easy to
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learn
English.
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Because
you have already conditioned as a situation where you could
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learn
English. If you
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want
to
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buy
something in a shop, you
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have to
speak with a seller to understand and
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buy
something. Foreign
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countries
and
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people
can
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improve
your English every
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skill
.
Additionally
, you can
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see
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a lot of
new things, culture, and foods, It seems surprising for you.

Maybe you
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live
in your
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country
,
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but
your environment is the English zone. It is full of supporting learning English with a
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native
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teacher
.
Of course
, when we have a
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native
coach or
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native
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country
, we spent
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a lot of
money.
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But
Mongolians say that you can develop in your capacity, you can earn more money immediately. Maybe your
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ability
will become your bright future life.

If you have a
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native
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teacher
to
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learn
, you can
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learn
more
fluently
than others. You can
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learn
to be the best one in your
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country
. Then you may teach others. It is possible
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because
you have the
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ability
and knowledge. Most
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people
do not know about asset
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skill
is the most
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important
in their career.
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, to
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learn
English with a
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native
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teacher
or not is
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so
complicated and need more effort and sweat. Then this
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ability
will
be reached
to you a billionaire in the world. Most of the well-known
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people
say they are
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so
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many
efforts to do one thing. If you
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want
to be a person with an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ability
in your profession, you should
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
English without wasting time or immediately.
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So
, for saving your
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own
time, I
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want
to advise and say to
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learn
English with a
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native
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teacher
.
Finally
, the most
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important
thing is the result.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 194

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
403 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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