It is evident that in many countries professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers are paid lesser than those who are employed in sports and entertainment sectors. In my opinion, I strongly consider this behaviour to be a bad practice as professionals should be earning more money.
The main rationale behind paying lump sum amounts to sport and entertainment workers is due to higher revenue generated by these businesses. In other words, people in some countries lavishly spend on these sectors both legally and illegally. For instance, research conducted by the UK government demonstrated that eighty percent of the citizen in London are more likely to spend a larger proportion of the income on entertainment, which enables high monetary inflow to that sector. Because of the high income, the people working for it get a higher salary. Consequently, entertainment and sport works are paid higher.
Giving more salary to these people discourages the professionals who provide services to people. Owning to the less package paid to healthcare employees and teachers, they get attracted to concentrate on other modes of earning, which deviate their primary focus. For example, an investigation conducted by the World Health Organization on physicians proved that most of the doctors are doing side business as they are not able to manage the family expenditure. As a result, the quality of work is reduced drastically, which is a major threat to a country.
In conclusion, I believe that it is not right to invest more in entertainment and sports, instead, the investment should be made to doctors, nurses, and teachers who play a vital role in everyone's life. 
It is evident that in  
many
 countries professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers  
are paid
 lesser than those who  
are employed
 in  
sports
 and entertainment sectors. In my opinion, I  
strongly
 consider this  
behaviour
 to be a  
bad
 practice as professionals should be earning more money.
The main rationale behind paying lump sum amounts to  
sport
 and entertainment workers is due to higher revenue generated by these businesses.  
In other words
,  
people
 in  
some
 countries  
lavishly
 spend on these sectors both  
legally
 and  
illegally
.  
For instance
, research conducted by the UK  
government
 demonstrated that eighty percent of the citizen in London are more likely to spend a larger proportion of the income on entertainment, which enables high monetary inflow to that sector.  
Because
 of the high income, the  
people
 working for it  
get
 a higher salary.  
Consequently
, entertainment and  
sport
 works  
are paid
 higher.
Giving more salary to these  
people
  discourages
 the professionals who provide services to  
people
. Owning to the less package paid to healthcare employees and teachers, they  
get
 attracted to concentrate on other modes of earning, which deviate their primary focus.  
For example
, an investigation conducted by the World Health Organization on physicians proved that most of the doctors are doing side business as they are not able to manage the family expenditure.  
As a result
, the quality of work is  
reduced
  drastically
, which is a major threat to a country. 
In conclusion
, I believe that it is not right to invest more in entertainment and  
sports
,  
instead
, the investment should  
be made
 to doctors, nurses, and teachers who play a vital role in everyone's life. 
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