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The internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world. is all information reliable on the internet? what could be done to control information online? v.1

The internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world. is all information reliable on the internet? what could be done to control information online? v. 1
In the era of advanced technology, life becomes easier for individuals as they can receive all the required information on the internet, and it is opportunistic for individuals. However, the main concern is whether the information available is trustworthy or not. I think to get reliable information online; strict action needs to be taken by the government. There are myriads of reasons behind the trust issue of the online information available to the public. The main one is that students these days prefer to study online, and they use most of the information from the internet because of that some students score low grades in their assignments, and the reason behind this is that the accessible information is not right. For instance, all the universities in Australia, provides access to their students to their university online library, so that they can read right eBooks and don’t waste their time in reading the material which is not reliable and is easily approachable on the internet. In my view, to control information online, higher authorities in the countries need to implement harsh plenties to the people, who is providing false information, otherwise, this will be harmful to the readers. Before publishing anything on the internet, people need to seek permission from the government. Moreover, most of the online material, which is written by scholars are paid, this needs to be free so that ordinary people can gain knowledge, and they will not use the other false information available. To sum up, the internet has revolutionised our lives by providing all the information at one place, and it seems like a dependable source of information, but this the duty of government to check the reliability of information available and provide their citizens with the right information.
In the era of advanced technology, life becomes easier for individuals as they can receive all the required
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information
on the internet, and it is opportunistic for individuals.
However
, the main concern is whether the
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information
available is trustworthy or not. I
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think
to
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get
reliable
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information
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online
; strict action
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needs
to
be taken
by the
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government
.

There are myriads of reasons behind the trust issue of the
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online
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information
available to the public. The main one is that students these days prefer to study
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online
, and they
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use
most of the
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information
from the internet
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because
of that
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some
students score low grades in their assignments, and the reason behind this is that the accessible
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information
is not right.
For instance
, all the universities in Australia, provides access to their students to their university
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online
library,
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so
that they can read right
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eBooks
and don’t waste their time in reading the material which is not reliable and is
easily
approachable on the internet.

In my view, to control
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information
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online
, higher authorities in the countries
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need
to implement harsh
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plenties
to the
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people
, who is providing false
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information
,
otherwise
, this will be harmful to the readers.
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Before
publishing anything on the internet,
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people
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need
to seek permission from the
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government
.
Moreover
, most of the
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online
material, which
is written
by scholars
are paid
, this
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needs
to be free
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so
that ordinary
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people
can gain knowledge, and they will not
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use
the other false
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information
available.

To sum up, the internet has
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revolutionised
our
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lives
by providing all the
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information
at one place, and it seems like a dependable source of
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information
,
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but
this the duty of
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government
to
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check
the reliability of
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information
available and provide their citizens with the right
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information
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay The internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world. is all information reliable on the internet? what could be done to control information online? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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