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The internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world Is all information reliable on the internet What could be done to control information online v.4

The internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world Is all information reliable on the internet What could be done to control information online v. 4
The internet has revolutionized people learning means and provide them with an unprecedented opportunity to learn despite their current location. This new-emerged phenomenon is the fastest way to share any kind of information. However, this feature could not be considering all beneficial as there are many misleading and unreliable information among. This issue and ways of mitigating wrong information sharing will be discussed here. The internet considered as an interactive way of communication where all people could spread their thought and beliefs. Indeed, every individual would be able to share information no matter they are right or have been made in their own mind. Provided that there is no monitoring on the information shared in this media, the rate of accuracy would be highly low. A good example for this would be sharing misleading information about the USA election in 2016 which result in Trump' s election when some intelligence agencies outside the country shared misleading information about his achievement and shaped people' s mind to vote for him. The issue has caused many controversies over his presidential. Nevertheless, there are some possible solutions which might help to alleviate the issue. Firstly, people should be thought to check information they gain from different sources such as different websites, TVs, radios, newspapers and so on. Secondly, source creditability must be announced from trustable organizations to guide people obtain their information from creditable sources. Last but not the least, a new trend that have been shaped among casual people is that they rely on social media channels and pages to gain information. In this regard, these social media are in charge of controlling and monitoring the information that are getting viral and stop them from deviating the society beliefs and information. In result, a set of activities from both authorities and people must be conducted to avoid misinformation in the internet environment. All in All, although there are many reasons behind sharing unreliable information on the internet ranging from people lack of knowledge how to check the information and some agencies conspiracies, there are some possible solution for that like teaching people and controlling massive information sharing.
The internet has revolutionized
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people
learning means and provide them with an unprecedented opportunity to learn despite their
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current
location. This new-emerged phenomenon is the fastest way to share any kind of
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information
.
However
, this feature could not be considering all beneficial as there are
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many
misleading and unreliable
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information
among. This issue and ways of mitigating
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wrong
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information
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sharing
will
be discussed
here.

The internet considered as an interactive way of communication where all
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people
could spread their
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thought
and beliefs.
Indeed
, every individual would be able to share
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information
no matter they are right or have
been made
in their
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own
mind. Provided that there is no monitoring on the
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information
shared in this media, the rate of accuracy would be
highly
low. A
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good
example for this would be
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sharing
misleading
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information
about the USA election in 2016 which result in
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Trump&
#039; s election when
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some
intelligence agencies outside the country shared misleading
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information
about his achievement and shaped
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people&
#039; s
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mind to vote
for him. The issue has caused
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many
controversies over his presidential.

Nevertheless
, there are
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some
possible solutions which might
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help
to alleviate the issue.
Firstly
,
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people
should be
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thought
to
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check
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information
they gain from
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different
sources such as
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different
websites, TVs, radios, newspapers and
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so
on.
Secondly
, source creditability
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must
be announced
from trustable organizations to guide
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people
obtain their
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information
from creditable sources. Last
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but
not the least, a new trend that have
been shaped
among casual
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people
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is
that they rely on social media channels and pages to gain
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information
. In this regard, these social media are in charge of controlling and monitoring the
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information
that are getting viral and
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stop
them from deviating the society beliefs and
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information
. In result, a set of activities from both authorities and
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people
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must
be conducted
to avoid misinformation in the internet environment.

All in All, although there are
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many
reasons behind
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sharing
unreliable
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information
on the internet ranging from
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people
lack of knowledge how to
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check
the
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information
and
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some
agencies conspiracies, there are
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some
possible solution for that like teaching
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people
and controlling massive
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information
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sharing
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay The internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world Is all information reliable on the internet What could be done to control information online v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
355 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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