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The internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world Is all information reliable on the internet What could be done to control information online v.3

The internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world Is all information reliable on the internet What could be done to control information online v. 3
Some citizens believe that, advanced technology can reduce, and avoid the total proportions of executing the crime. In my opinion, I disagree to this regard that, online communicating media and rate of illegal act are connected with each other. However, I believe that, telecommunications is one of the major reasons that are causing depression, and anger among individuals, which is leading to these kind of situations. This essay will discuss about various factors on the impact of the technology in the world. On the one hand, folks, and family members usually tend to do tasks, which they observe, since their toddler period. For example, While, most of the kids get's opportunity to spend quality time and, receive affection, little kid needs to face trauma, which further, lead to dreadful acts once they reach their adulthood. Hence, automation cannot be totally considered to increase of assassination rates in all over the globe. On the other hand, many people today, are continuously addicted to technology on laptops and mobile phones. For example, Most of the communities prefer to engage themselves in social media, rather than, on community gatherings, and activities. While, few are making benefit with utilizing technology, others are misusing by violating the needs of mechanization, by putting content that cause differences between societies, and other attributes. These events have led to fury in population further, leading to physical abuse and manslaughter. Finally, In conclusion, I can conclude that, despite of advancements of machines and mechanics, it is not directly connected to sinful acts and, cannot able to prevent the occurrence of such situations. Though, uploading tech medium with provoking context, it can be controlled by human intelligence and activities to spread awareness throughout the world.
Some
citizens believe that, advanced
technology
can
reduce
, and avoid the total proportions of executing the crime. In my opinion, I disagree to this regard that, online communicating media and rate of illegal act
are connected
with each
other
.
However
, I believe that, telecommunications is one of the major reasons that are causing depression, and anger among individuals, which is leading to
these kind
of situations. This essay will
discuss about various
factors on the impact of the
technology
in the world.

On the one hand, folks, and family members
usually
tend
to do
tasks, which they observe, since their toddler period.
For example
, While, most of the kids
get's
opportunity to spend quality time and, receive affection,
little
kid needs to face trauma, which
further
, lead to dreadful acts once they reach their adulthood.
Hence
, automation cannot be
totally
considered to increase
of assassination rates in all over the globe.

On the
other
hand,
many
people
today
, are
continuously
addicted to
technology
on laptops and mobile phones.
For example
, Most of the communities prefer to engage themselves in social media,
rather
than, on community gatherings, and activities. While, few are making benefit with utilizing
technology
, others are misusing by violating the needs of mechanization, by putting content that cause differences between societies, and
other
attributes. These
events
have led to fury in population
further
, leading to physical abuse and manslaughter.

Finally
,
In conclusion
, I can conclude that,
despite of
advancements of machines and mechanics, it is not
directly
connected to sinful acts and,
cannot able
to
prevent
the occurrence of such situations. Though, uploading tech medium with provoking context, it can
be controlled
by human intelligence and activities to spread awareness throughout the world.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world Is all information reliable on the internet What could be done to control information online v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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