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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. v.9

The internet has greatly increased our access to information. v. 9
Electronic revolution and access to the Internet has provided an easy approach to the information and technology. Undoubtedly, it has resulted in a significant increase in literacy level, knowledge and better understanding of the world, but it has resulted in a few problems too. This essay will describe to what extent its a good thing; The internet has been a major contributor in the revolution of education in rural and inaccessible areas. Online education has made every single individual of emerging economies access to online courses and degrees, thereby distant learning is no more a dream for the citizens of developing countries, therefore more skilled students are serving the counties. Rural areas of Pakistan are getting awareness about new fashion trends hence improving designs and export of local handicrafts thus improvement in the lifestyle of the local community. Boost in freelancing and online businesses is also considered as a miracle of post internet era. India is a developing country with the vast majority of unemployed youth has benefitted greatly from the internet, therefore, considerable uplifting of the economy has resulted in better job opportunities and lifestyle improvement of poor people. On the other hand it has provided an uncontrolled medium of violence, social discriminates, social evil uprising and bad influence on the adolescents. Depend on cloud data storage has throttled cyber crimes and loss in databases. It can be concluded that facilitation of web browsing is a very good thing and has greatly benefited our lives, but it can have harmful effects on immature users, but ultimately its positive effects overshadow the negative effects, therefore regulation and monitoring is required
Electronic revolution and access to the Internet has provided an easy approach to the information and technology.
Undoubtedly
, it has resulted in a significant increase in literacy level, knowledge and better understanding of the world,
but
it has resulted in a few problems too. This essay will
describe
to what extent
its
a
good
thing;

The internet has been a major contributor in the revolution of education in rural and inaccessible areas. Online education has made every single individual of emerging economies access to online courses and degrees, thereby distant learning is no more a dream for the citizens of
developing countries
,
therefore
more skilled students are serving the counties. Rural areas of Pakistan are getting awareness about new fashion trends
hence
improving designs and export of local handicrafts
thus
improvement in the lifestyle of the local community.

Boost in freelancing and online businesses is
also
considered as a miracle of post internet era. India is a
developing country
with the vast majority of unemployed youth has
benefitted
greatly
from the internet,
therefore
, considerable uplifting of the economy has resulted in better job opportunities and lifestyle improvement of poor
people
.

On the other hand
it has provided an uncontrolled medium of violence, social discriminates, social evil uprising and
bad
influence on the adolescents. Depend on cloud data storage has throttled cyber crimes and loss in databases.

It can
be concluded
that facilitation of web browsing is a
very
good
thing and has
greatly
benefited our
lives
,
but
it can have harmful effects on immature users,
but
ultimately
its
positive
effects overshadow the
negative
effects,
therefore
regulation and monitoring
is required
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay The internet has greatly increased our access to information. v. 9

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
269 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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