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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. v.8

The internet has greatly increased our access to information. v. 8
It is argued that access to information has exponentially increased due to widespread of the internet. I agree with the statement. This essay will first discuss how the internet helps anyone learn anything, without going anywhere, followed by its impact on college students and their projects. Firstly, with the invention of the internet, it is now possible to learn anything at convenience, without going anywhere. To explain, people who have a hectic schedule and want to learn something new, for instance cooking, they don't need to join any physical classes. They can go to YouTube, a video-based platform, and search whatever dish they want to cook and learn from the video. As a matter of fact, in 2018, The Times conducted a research and found that 60 % more people, as compared to people 20 years ago, would want to learn something new, since it is available online and is easily accessible. Secondly, it has a positive impact on students who are doing research for their assignments and projects. In other words, students have a vast pool of information available to access and do their research on. Numerous research websites, such as IbisWorld, Marketline, give students exposure to data, which otherwise would be impossible to gather. To illustrate, in 2019, Bloomberg Canada analyzed and compared students' performance on academic projects, with that of students' performance 15 years ago, and found that the quality of work has increased drastically among university students. To conclude, the internet has created endless possibilities, and one of them is exposure to a vast amount of information. As a result, people can pursue courses online and students can leverage the internet to ace their assignments.
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is argued
that access to information has
exponentially
increased due to widespread of the internet. I
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agree
with the statement. This essay will
first
discuss how the internet
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helps
anyone
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learn
anything, without going anywhere, followed by its impact on college
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students
and their projects.

Firstly
, with the invention of the internet, it is
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now
possible to
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learn
anything at convenience, without going anywhere. To
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explain
,
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people
who have a hectic schedule and want to
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learn
something new,
for instance
cooking, they don't need to
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join
any physical classes. They can go to YouTube, a video-based platform, and search whatever dish they want to cook and
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learn
from the video. As a matter of fact, in 2018, The Times conducted a
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research
and found that 60 % more
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people
, as compared to
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people
20 years ago, would want to
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learn
something new, since it is available online and is
easily
accessible.

Secondly
, it has a
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positive
impact on
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students
who are doing
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research
for their assignments and projects.
In other words
,
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students
have a vast pool of information available to access and do their
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research
on. Numerous
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research
websites, such as
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IbisWorld
,
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Marketline
, give
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students
exposure to data, which
otherwise
would be impossible to gather. To illustrate, in 2019, Bloomberg Canada analyzed and compared students' performance on academic projects, with that of students' performance 15 years ago, and found that the quality of work has increased
drastically
among university students.

To conclude
, the internet has created endless possibilities, and one of them is exposure to a vast amount of information.
As a result
,
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people
can pursue courses online and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
can leverage the internet to ace their assignments.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay The internet has greatly increased our access to information. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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