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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.26

The internet has greatly increased our access to information. v. 26
After technology had been well-developed for worldwide citizens, the internet started playing a pivotal role as an online database for all different professions. In my perspective, this is a great opportunity we receive from being able to reach our target within the fingertip. This essay completely agrees with the statement and states two reasons why the situation is considered a positive effect on humankind. The first reason is that it provides convenience in approaching the information from all around the world. Simply put, access to textbooks and academic studies will become at ease for every professional field. The online platform, such as Academia, and Wikipedia, can be an obvious instance to elaborate this point with their acts as an enormous library for all users. Moreover, worldwide individuals are brought together via social media platforms which provide more convenient modes of communication among those in the same profession. Therefore, the needed knowledge can be interchanged much more easily. Another reason that benefits our daily life is that plagiarism will be easily detected. With the ability of online websites, the number of plagiarised typologies tends to show a significant decrease. For example, online application, like Grammarly, allows paid users to check whether they are duplicating others or they are being replicated with a feature so-called plagiarism detector. This positive will encourage the organisation to produce more beneficial research and promote transparency in academic area. In summary, there might be some disadvantages of online access to information, however, the advantages, especially the convenience for information approach, completely outweigh those. In my opinion, the use of the internet as an online platform for collecting business and academic data is considered a useful condition.
After technology had been well-developed for worldwide citizens, the internet
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started
playing a pivotal role as an
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online
database for all
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different
professions. In my perspective, this is a great opportunity we receive from being able to reach our target within the fingertip. This essay completely
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agrees
with the statement and states two reasons why the situation
is considered
a
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positive
effect on humankind.

The
first
reason is that it provides convenience in approaching the information from all around the world.
Simply
put, access to textbooks and academic studies will become at
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
for every professional field. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
platform, such as Academia, and Wikipedia, can be an obvious instance to elaborate this point with their acts as an enormous library for all users.
Moreover
, worldwide individuals
are brought
together via social media platforms which provide more convenient modes of communication among those in the same profession.
Therefore
, the needed knowledge can
be interchanged
much more
easily
.

Another reason that benefits our daily life is that plagiarism will be
easily
detected. With the ability of
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online
websites, the number of
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plagiarised
typologies tends to
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show
a significant decrease.
For example
,
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online
application, like
Grammarly
,
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allows
paid users to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
whether they are duplicating
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others or
they are
being replicated
with a feature
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so
-called plagiarism detector. This
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positive
will encourage the
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organisation
to produce more beneficial research and promote transparency in academic area.

In summary, there might be
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some
disadvantages of
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online
access to information,
however
, the advantages,
especially
the convenience for information approach, completely outweigh those. In my opinion, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of the internet as an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
platform for collecting business and academic data
is considered
a useful condition.
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8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The internet has greatly increased our access to information. v. 26

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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