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Write about the following topic. The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Interent is a source for performing all the activities which you would like to do or assigned to do. Consider an Information technology company, where a developer has been assigned a task to develop a website but he is stuck somewhere and have no clue to get over it. The only option which could possibly come to his mind is "USE THE INTERNET". In terms of getting social connections, internet has become a media and a business for some social networking sites like facebook, Instagram app etc. People find friend, companies find data. The data which people will legally approve without even knowing where it can be used just to expose themselves socially. Internet is not only used for innovation but it can also be used for destruction. A dark web has a plathora of information which is just floating on the internet and people don't even know that what amount of there data is floating all around. Cyber crime has become very common which results into a big destruction eventually. From a kid to the old man, all uses interent for their entertainment but what happens behind? . Information. YES, the information which you feed to create an account is used. They are sold, they are sold to big companies to understand humans physicology, to create a market as per the individual needs. Information is sold for millions of dollers. In my opinion, considering above facts the access to the information should be limited. It should be only till the extent until it wont harm others. Infromation can make or break the society. So, we can conclude that if the access to information is not restricted on interent it may also break the society.
Interent
is a source for performing all the activities which you would like to do or assigned to do. Consider an
Information
technology
company
, where a developer has
been assigned
a task to develop a website
but
he
is stuck
somewhere and have no clue to
get
over it. The
only
option which could
possibly
come
to his mind is
"
USE
THE INTERNET
"
.

In terms of getting social connections, internet has become a media and a business for
some
social networking sites like
facebook
, Instagram app etc.
People
find friend,
companies
find data. The data which
people
will
legally
approve without even knowing where it can be
used
just
to expose themselves
socially
.

Internet is not
only
used
for innovation
but
it can
also
be
used
for destruction. A dark web has a
plathora
of
information
which is
just
floating on the internet and
people
don't even know that what amount of
there
data is floating all around. Cyber crime has become
very
common which results into a
big
destruction
eventually
.

From a kid to the
old
man
, all
uses
interent
for their entertainment
but
what happens behind?
.
Information
. YES, the
information
which you feed to create an account is
used
. They
are sold
, they
are sold
to
big
companies
to understand humans
physicology
, to create a market as per the individual needs.
Information
is sold
for millions of
dollers
.

In my opinion, considering above facts the access to the
information
should
be limited
. It should be
only
till the extent until it
wont
harm others.
Infromation
can
make
or break the society.
So
, we can conclude that if the access to
information
is not restricted on
interent
it may
also
break the society.
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IELTS essay The internet has greatly increased our access to information.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
285 words
5.5
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