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Some people believe that every human can create art. Other people think that art can only be created by people with special talents. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.4

Some people believe that every human can create art. Other people think that art can only be created by people with special talents. v. 4
Nowadays, creating an art has become ever increasing trait in different fields. However, while some argue that anybody is able to be creative regardless of their area, I am with those who hold the opinion that art can be produced only by those who possess some special skills. On the one hand, it could be argued that the creation of art can be done through every human being no matter what their background status hold. This is because they believe one should be passionate about learning it. For instance, any person who wants to learn piano, it demands hours of every day practice, relentless efforts towards it, and with wholehearted dedication they might become a pianist. In contrast, if people are not keen on learning such skills, they will not be able to learn an art. On the other hand, I believe that producing an art can be sheer possible when a person holds some specific talents in that particular field and consequently they are able to shape skill without deferring in doing that. Moreover, I would argue that it requires specialization in that area. For example, some people specialize in painting, they will do their best to create the masterpiece as they have a depth of knowledge in that area, whereas, people who do not belong to such areas are unable to do so; due to dearth of interest and knowledge. So, in my view, people who have some unique skills are only able to produce art. In conclusion, although it is undeniable that every human can create art with continuous hard efforts, creative is such unique talent that needs some special skills. Therefore, on balance, I believe art can be created only when people possess some special skills.
Nowadays, creating an
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art
has become
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ever increasing
trait in
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different
fields.
However
, while
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some
argue that anybody is
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able
to be creative regardless of their
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area
, I am with those
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who
hold the opinion that
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art
can
be produced
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only
by those
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who
possess
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some
special
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skills
.

On the one hand, it could
be argued
that the creation of
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art
can
be done
through every human being no matter what their background status hold. This is
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because
they believe one should be passionate about learning it.
For instance
, any person
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who
wants to learn piano, it demands hours of every day practice, relentless efforts towards it, and with wholehearted dedication they might become a pianist.
In contrast
, if
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people
are not keen on learning such
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skills
, they will not be
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able
to learn an art.

On the other hand
, I believe that producing an
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art
can be sheer possible when a person holds
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some
specific talents in that particular field and
consequently
they are
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able
to shape
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skill
without deferring in doing that.
Moreover
, I would argue that it requires specialization in that
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area
.
For example
,
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some
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people
specialize in painting, they will do their best to create the masterpiece as they have a depth of knowledge in that
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area
, whereas,
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people
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who
do not belong to such
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areas
are unable to do
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so
; due to dearth of interest and knowledge.
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So
, in my view,
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people
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who
have
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some
unique
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skills
are
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only
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able
to produce art.

In conclusion
, although it is undeniable that every human can create
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art
with continuous
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hard
efforts, creative is such unique talent that needs
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some
special
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skills
.
Therefore
, on balance, I believe
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art
can
be created
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only
when
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people
possess
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some
special
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skills
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that every human can create art. Other people think that art can only be created by people with special talents. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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Lexical Resource: 8.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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Task Achievement: 8.5
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