With the progression of the society, many people do their family planning in their thirties rather than twenties which was common a decade ago. This essay will discuss positives and drawbacks of this trend and which outweighs the other.
As people have turned extremely ambitious these days, they prefer achieving their goals and indulge into starting a family later. This priority shift not only help them focus and earn huge amount of money to make them self sufficient, but it also helps to financially support the future generation in a better way. For instance, financially independent parents are able to provide a better lifestyle for their children than those who are unstable in their careers.
On the contrary, ageing brings vulnerability of severe health issues in a person's life. By the same token, pregnancy becomes complicated at the later stage, both for a man and a woman. A recent research concluded that, the probability of conceiving in couples is reduced by 23% after they touch their thirties and can further be declined up to 53% over the age of thirty five. Secondly, individuals do not remain fit enough to support their children, if the age gap between the parents and child is big. For example, if a child is born when a man is forty five, his child would be only twenty and not financially independent at the man's retirement age. Hence, the family might need extra financial aids to support the children.
In conclusion, they are few advantages to starting a family late such as a child can be provided better financial aid to support his life, the disadvantages are more and it outweighs the advantages as the complications in conceiving can increase with a person's age and the generation gap between progenitors and their children is huge which can become a major issue in future.
With the progression of the society,
many
people
do their
family
planning in their thirties
rather
than twenties which was common a decade ago. This essay will discuss positives and drawbacks of this trend and which outweighs the other.
As
people
have turned
extremely
ambitious these days, they prefer achieving their goals and indulge into starting a
family
later. This priority shift not
only
help
them focus and earn huge amount of money to
make
them
self sufficient
,
but
it
also
helps
to
financially
support
the future generation in a better way.
For instance
,
financially
independent parents are able to provide a better lifestyle for their children than those who are unstable in their careers.
On the contrary
,
ageing
brings vulnerability of severe health issues in a person's life. By the same token, pregnancy becomes complicated at the later stage, both for a
man
and a woman. A recent research concluded that, the probability of conceiving in couples is
reduced
by 23% after they touch their thirties and can
further
be declined
up to 53% over the
age
of
thirty five
.
Secondly
, individuals do not remain fit
enough
to
support
their children, if the
age
gap between the parents and
child
is
big
.
For example
, if a
child
is born
when a
man
is
forty five
, his
child
would be
only
twenty and not
financially
independent at the
man
's retirement
age
.
Hence
, the
family
might need extra financial aids to
support
the children.
In conclusion
, they are few advantages to starting a
family
late such as a
child
can
be provided
better financial aid to
support
his life, the disadvantages are more and it outweighs the advantages as the complications in conceiving can increase with a person's
age
and the generation gap between progenitors and their children is huge which can become a major issue
in future
.
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