Having a single career or several career is a problem of controversy. Some people think having several job is not good idea as you can not focus on them and it led to some problem while others claims the opposite thing. Together, the two would have their reasons which I try to explain in the following paragraph.
First and foremost thing we must consider is that concept of work has changed for younger generation. They no longer considered it as tools to earning money. That is partly because of they wanna impact the world and people through their career. With that in mind, they attempt to learn variety of skills and experience several careers as the education is not enough today. For instance, my roommate has a creative idea and having several jobs help her to be familiar with the economical condition and learn many practical things which can not be learn by education or study.
In spite of all possible advantages of having several jobs, there is some disadvantages too. Having several jobs needs spend more time which led some problems in personal life. They have less time for their family. For example, my grandpa has several jobs which occupy his time and had no time for family gathering or play with his children which it led to very weak relationship with my mother. It will be exceedingly hard to say he enjoyed his life as he was often on a mission.
As I mentioned above, people are split on this idea. A recent study done by researcher concluded that people who has further education do it for their interest. In my opinion focusing on a one job and be professional on it is better than be jack on several field and master of nothing.
Having
a single
career
or several
career
is a problem of controversy.
Some
people
think
having
several
job
is not
good
idea
as you can not focus on them and it led to
some
problem
while others claims the opposite thing. Together, the two would have their reasons which I try to
explain
in the following paragraph.
First
and foremost thing we
must
consider is that concept of work has
changed
for younger generation. They no longer considered it as tools to earning money.
That is
partly
because of they
wanna
impact the world and
people
through their
career
. With that in mind, they attempt to learn variety of
skills
and experience several
careers
as the education is not
enough
today
.
For instance
, my roommate has a creative
idea
and
having
several
jobs
help
her to be familiar with the economical condition and learn
many
practical things which can not be
learn
by education or study.
In spite of
all possible advantages of
having
several
jobs
, there is
some
disadvantages too.
Having
several
jobs
needs spend more
time
which led
some
problems in personal life. They have less
time
for their family.
For example
, my grandpa has several
jobs
which occupy his
time
and had no
time
for family gathering or play with his children which it led to
very
weak relationship with my mother. It will be
exceedingly
hard
to say he enjoyed his life as he was
often
on a mission.
As I mentioned above,
people
are split
on this
idea
. A recent study done by researcher concluded that
people
who
has
further
education do it for their interest. In my opinion focusing on a one
job
and be professional on it is better than be
jack
on
several field
and master of nothing.
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