Education has been a topic that attracts great attention in recent years. It is thought that all educational institutions should allow learners to focus on their favourite subjects whereas others suppose that students should study only necessary subjects with regard to their later life like science and technology. This essay aims to elaborate both views and express my opinion.
On the one hand, people have their own reasons when emphasizing children should only learn useful knowledge relating to their future. First, limited school time of children should be spent on necessary purposes. Because children not only have to concentrate on academic performance, but they are also required to participate in the extra curriculum and physical activities in order to foster their social skills. Second, studying practical knowledge such as science and technology subjects contribute to the insurance of job. A qualified student are able to attract employers' eye easier and as a result it help to reduce the unemployment rate.
On the other hand, allowing students to pursue the subject which they dream about may bring a wide range of benefits. In fact, there is a number of students keen on study art and they have incredible capability in aesthetic things such as draw, sing or dance. Being allowed to follow their interest possibly fosters them to become a potential artist in the future and that type of job even helps them to make ends meet. It is undeniable that art is useful for their career.
In conclusion, from my perspective, educational institutions had better encourage their students to choose their appropriate field and be responsible for their decision no matter how useless it is criticized.
Education has been a topic that attracts great attention in recent years. It is
thought
that all educational institutions should
allow
learners to focus on their
favourite
subjects
whereas others suppose that
students
should study
only
necessary
subjects
with regard to their later life like science and technology. This essay aims to elaborate both views and express my opinion.
On the one hand,
people
have their
own
reasons when emphasizing children should
only
learn useful knowledge relating to their future.
First
, limited school time of children should
be spent
on necessary purposes.
Because
children not
only
have to
concentrate on academic performance,
but
they are
also
required to participate in the extra curriculum and physical activities in order to foster their social
skills
. Second, studying practical knowledge such as science and technology
subjects
contribute to the insurance of job. A qualified
student
are able to attract
employers&
#039; eye easier and
as a result
it
help
to
reduce
the unemployment rate.
On the other hand
, allowing
students
to pursue the
subject
which they dream about may bring a wide range of benefits. In fact, there is a number of
students
keen on study
art and
they have incredible capability in aesthetic things such as draw, sing or dance. Being
allowed
to follow their interest
possibly
fosters them to become a potential artist in the future and that type of job even
helps
them to
make
ends
meet
. It is undeniable that art is useful for their career.
In conclusion
, from my perspective, educational institutions had better encourage their
students
to choose their appropriate field and be responsible for their decision no matter how useless it
is criticized
.
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