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The growth in international travel means that misunderstandings between countries will inevitably decrease. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.1

The growth in international travel means that misunderstandings between countries will inevitably decrease. with this statement? v. 1
Countries have many differences in regards to wealth and development, and what we need is a tool that can reduce these misunderstandings. Some people believe that if we increase international travel, we can reduce the misunderstandings between nations. I agree with the notion that development in travel will help two nations to keep their confusion about another country aside because we will get to know each other through their culture and society. Every country has a different cultural, economical and geographical growth, so in order to understand how other nations work we need to travel there without forming any misperception through what we read in newspapers or see on the internet. With regards to culture, every nation is based upon own culture and values, and with the help of internet we can learn anything about other countries; whereas, the Internet is not a reliable source because it can include misinterpreted information because differences in language, so international movement is necessary if we want to know about other nations. However, exploring other countries has many benefits. Most significant is that travelling can reduce the barrier and can improve the relationship between nations. For Instance, business travel makes two countries build a respectable relationship which indirectly can reduce misunderstandings. Moreover, socialization during international travel helps to stronger the bonds and build trust between two nations, and businessmen can use that trust to increase their import and export goods. In a nutshell, every nation has a different perspective about another country, whether it is negative or positive, and international competition creates tension between nations, and this tension can be reduced if people get more chances to travel other nations.
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Countries
have
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many
differences
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in regards to
wealth and development, and what we need is a tool that can
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reduce
these misunderstandings.
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Some
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people
believe that if we increase
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international
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travel
, we can
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reduce
the misunderstandings between
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nations
. I
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agree
with the notion that development in
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travel
will
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help
two
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nations
to
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keep
their confusion about another
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country
aside
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because
we will
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get
to know each
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other
through their culture and society.

Every
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country
has a
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different
cultural, economical and geographical growth,
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so
in order to understand how
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other
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nations
work we need to
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travel
there without forming any misperception through what we read in newspapers or
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see
on the internet.
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With regards to
culture, every
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nation
is based
upon
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own
culture and values, and with the
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help
of internet we can learn anything about
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other
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countries
; whereas, the Internet is not a reliable source
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because
it can include misinterpreted information
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because
differences in language,
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so
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international
movement is necessary if we want to know about
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other
nations.

However
, exploring
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other
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countries
has
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many
benefits. Most significant is that travelling can
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reduce
the barrier and can
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improve
the relationship between
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nations
.
For Instance
, business
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travel
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makes
two
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countries
build a respectable relationship which
indirectly
can
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reduce
misunderstandings.
Moreover
, socialization during
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international
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travel
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helps
to stronger the bonds and build trust between two
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nations
, and businessmen can
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use
that trust to increase their import and export
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goods
.

In a nutshell, every
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nation
has a
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different
perspective about another
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country
, whether it is
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negative
or
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positive
, and
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international
competition creates tension between
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nations
, and this tension can be
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reduced
if
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people
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get
more chances to
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travel
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other
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nations
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
The limits of my language mean the limits of my world.
Ludwig Wittgenstein

IELTS essay The growth in international travel means that misunderstandings between countries will inevitably decrease. with this statement? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
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