The line graph shows the percentage of shopping on the Internet in the different period of the day by five groups of age from 16 to over 60 years old in 2015.
Overall, the number of sales in most of age groups start to increase remarkably from 9 a. m and the time has the most of the sales is between 6 pm to 8 pm and then it decreases dramatically from 10 am to the midnight. However, over-60-years-old group has some differences with the others, the quantity of customers in this group changes in a fluctuation.
Firstly, age group from 25-34 years old has a large number of sales in almost time of the day in comparison with another groups. There is a considerable rise from 9 am and then peak at approximately 32% of sales.
Secondly, 3 age groups include 16-24, 35-44 and 45-59 have similarity in their growth but the group 35-44 has a sharp increase start at 4 pm and reach a maximum rate of online shopping about 30%.
Finally, the level of online shopping in group over 60 years old fluctuates between 9 am and 2 pm. It hit a peak at 9 am about 20% and it start to decline notably from 2 pm to the midnight.
The line graph
shows
the percentage of shopping on the Internet in the
different
period of the day by five
groups
of
age
from 16 to over 60 years
old
in 2015.
Overall
, the number of sales in most of
age
groups
start
to increase
remarkably
from 9 a. m and the time has the most of the sales is between 6 pm to 8 pm and then it decreases
dramatically
from 10 am to the midnight.
However
, over-60-years-
old
group
has
some
differences with the others, the quantity of customers in this
group
changes
in a fluctuation.
Firstly
,
age
group
from 25-34 years
old
has
a large number of
sales in almost time of the day
in comparison
with another
groups
. There is a considerable rise from 9 am and then peak at approximately 32% of sales.
Secondly
, 3
age
groups
include 16-24, 35-44 and 45-59 have similarity in their growth
but
the
group
35-44 has a sharp increase
start
at 4 pm and reach a maximum rate of online shopping about 30%.
Finally
, the level of online shopping in
group
over 60 years
old
fluctuates between 9 am and 2 pm. It hit a peak at 9 am about 20% and it
start
to decline
notably
from 2 pm to the midnight.
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