The majority of high school graduates seek a university education. Although some universities are private, most of them are for free. However, I consider poor people have more difficulty accessing higher education than those who have money.
First of all, it should be said that not everyone has the same preparation. Private schools have better education than most public schools, which gives students with money an advantage some poor students do not have. Additionally, most careers such as medicine or engineering require extra studies in order to pass an admission exam. For instance, institutes or tutors charge as much as AR$ 80. 000 for an admission exam. This sets a huge difference for those who can pay this tuition and those who can not.
Furthermore, not all careers are available in public universities. Careers such as International Relationships are only available in universities like San Pablo or UNSTA in Tucumán. Each has an admission exam for which you have to pay an absurd bill. In addition, they charge each student a monthly fee, which is out of reach for everyone who does not have a stable economic situation. Should poor students decide to study any career only available in a private university, it is almost certain they will have to move to another city in search of a more affordable option, or change their mind and study something else.
All in all, it appears to me that having cash gives any student a huge advantage when it comes to higher education. This is due to the fact that students with economical benefits have access to extra help and options that otherwise would be hard to obtain.
The majority of high school
graduates
seek a
university
education
. Although
some
universities
are private, most of them are for free.
However
, I consider poor
people
have more difficulty accessing higher
education
than those
who
have money.
First of all
, it should
be said
that not everyone has the same preparation. Private schools have better
education
than most public schools, which gives
students
with money an advantage
some
poor
students
do not have.
Additionally
, most
careers
such as medicine or engineering require extra studies in order to pass an admission exam.
For instance
, institutes or tutors charge as much as
AR$
80. 000 for an admission exam. This sets a huge difference for those
who
can pay this tuition and those
who
can not.
Furthermore
, not all
careers
are available in public
universities
.
Careers
such as International Relationships are
only
available in
universities
like San Pablo or
UNSTA
in
Tucumán
. Each has an admission exam for which you
have to
pay an absurd bill.
In addition
, they charge each
student
a monthly fee, which is out of reach for everyone
who
does not have a stable economic situation. Should poor
students
decide to study any
career
only
available in a private
university
, it is almost certain they will
have to
move
to another city in search of a more affordable option, or
change
their mind and study something else.
All in all, it appears to me that having cash gives any
student
a huge advantage when it
comes
to higher
education
.
This is due to the fact that
students
with
economical
benefits have access to extra
help
and options that
otherwise
would be
hard
to obtain.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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