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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 200 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.1

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 200
The line graph provides information about the quality of six different kinds of energy in the United States, measured by quadrillion units, between 1980 and 2030. Overall, it is clear that almost the amount of power that people consumed, such as fuels, coal, natural gas, nuclear and solar/wind is predicted to increase; however, the consumption of hydro power still will steady in fifty years from 1980 to 2030. In 1990, fuel was the kind of energy with the highest consumption, on average, people used 35 quadrillion units; compered to approximated 20 quadrillion units for natural gas, and 16 quadrillion energy for coal. While the figure for nuclear, solar/wind and hydro power were about the same as 4 quadrillion units. From 1980 to 2015 the quality of coal and natural gas jumped slowly, and both consumed around 25 quadrillion units. Meanwhile, petrol and oil continued to increase to 43 quadrillion units; the amount of nuclear, solar/wind and hydro power consumed 6 quadrillion units, 5 quadrillion units and 4 quadrillion units respectively. Over a five-year period between 2020 to 2025, the amount of natural gas, nuclear, solar/wind and hydro power will remain stable at roughly 25 quadrillion units, 7 quadrillion units, 5 quadrillion units and 4 quadrillion units respectively. The consumption of fuel and coal will experience upward trend during the same period. Between 2025 and 2030, Petro and oil consumption will rise significantly to 49 quadrillion energy and it will be expected the highest figure in the line graph. Besides, the amount of coal will climb considerably to 31 quadrillion units. Looking into the future, an inconsiderable increase in the consumption of nuclear and solar, with a rise of over 1 quadrillion energy in just five years from 2025 to 2030.
The line graph provides information about the quality of six
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different
kinds of
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energy
in the United States, measured by quadrillion
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units
, between 1980 and 2030.

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, it is
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clear
that almost the
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amount
of
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power
that
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people
consumed, such as fuels, coal,
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natural
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gas
, nuclear and
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solar/wind
is predicted
to increase;
however
, the
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consumption
of hydro
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power
still
will steady in fifty years from 1980 to 2030.

In 1990, fuel was the kind of
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energy
with the highest
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consumption
, on average,
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people
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used
35 quadrillion
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units
;
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compered
to approximated 20 quadrillion
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units
for
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natural
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gas
, and 16 quadrillion
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energy
for coal. While the figure for nuclear,
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solar/wind
and hydro
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power
were about the same as 4 quadrillion
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units
. From 1980 to 2015 the quality of coal and
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natural
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gas
jumped
slowly
, and both consumed around 25 quadrillion
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units
. Meanwhile, petrol and oil continued to increase to 43 quadrillion
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units
; the
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amount
of nuclear,
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solar/wind
and hydro
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power
consumed 6 quadrillion
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units
, 5 quadrillion
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units
and 4 quadrillion
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units
respectively
.

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between 2020 to 2025
, the
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amount
of
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natural
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gas
, nuclear,
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solar/wind
and hydro
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power
will remain stable at roughly 25 quadrillion
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units
, 7 quadrillion
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units
, 5 quadrillion
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units
and 4 quadrillion
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units
respectively
. The
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consumption
of fuel and coal will experience upward trend during the same period. Between 2025 and 2030,
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Petro
and oil
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consumption
will rise
significantly
to 49 quadrillion
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energy
and it will be
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expected
the highest figure in the line graph.
Besides
, the
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amount
of coal will climb
considerably
to 31 quadrillion
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units
. Looking into the future, an inconsiderable increase in the
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consumption
of nuclear and solar, with a rise of over 1 quadrillion
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energy
in
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five years from 2025 to 2030.
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45Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 200

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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