The line chart depicts the information regarding the fluctuations in new born rates of China and USA for a span of 8 decades, from 1920 to 2000.
It is clear from the data that, during the initial period of 1920' s the birth rate of China and USA were almost the same, showed a mere difference of 2% and a slow upward trend. But after the 5 yers of time, in 1925 both nations birth rate dipped to it' s original figure of 1920 (10% and 12% respectively). In 1925, both regime' s figures showed an increasing trend again. Whereas, China' s new born rate reached not so high as figure of 15% in 1935.
From 1935 to 1950, China and USA figures reflected some fluctuations and reached its all time high proportion of 20% and 15% respectively. China' s figures faced a steep decline in the year 1955 by more than below half percentage of previous recorded numbers and continued this trend till the year 2000. There it touched almost the rock bottom point of 2%. While, USA also showed the same downward trend but not that much as china. USA figures at the end of the the millennium was 7%.
In conclusion, Both countries started off with an increasing trend and reached their high percentages during the year of 1950.
At the same time their new born rates reduced drastically over the period of 80 years of time.
The line chart depicts the information regarding the fluctuations in new born
rates
of China and USA for a span of 8 decades, from 1920 to 2000.
It is
clear
from the data that, during the initial period of 1920' s the birth
rate
of China and USA were almost the same,
showed
a mere difference of 2% and a slow upward
trend
.
But
after the 5
yers
of
time
, in 1925 both nations birth
rate
dipped to
it&
#039; s original
figure
of 1920 (10% and 12%
respectively
). In 1925, both
regime&
#039; s
figures
showed
an increasing
trend
again. Whereas,
China&
#039; s new born
rate
reached not
so
high as
figure
of 15% in 1935.
From 1935 to 1950, China and USA
figures
reflected
some
fluctuations and reached its all
time
high proportion of 20% and 15%
respectively
.
China&
#039; s
figures
faced a steep decline in the
year
1955 by more than below half percentage of previous recorded numbers and continued this
trend
till the
year
2000. There it touched almost the rock bottom point of 2%. While, USA
also
showed
the same downward
trend
but
not that much as china. USA
figures
at the
end
of
the the
millennium was 7%.
In conclusion
, Both countries
started
off with an increasing
trend
and reached their high percentages during the
year
of 1950.
At the same
time
their new born
rates
reduced
drastically
over the period of 80 years of
time
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes