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Nowadays people get information through news and papers but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news Should we believe the journalists What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have v.6

Nowadays people get information through news and papers but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news Should we believe the journalists What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have v. 6
Awareness about the recent events occurring all around the world reaches each and every house through media like news channels, newspapers and radio. People receive the information about current affairs from these medias but are skeptical about its reliability. This essay establishes the fact about worthiness of the journalists and the qualities required to be a good correspondent. News related to any field is captured by journalists with their talent and hard work. People having doubts about the credence of the news can be assured by providing empirical evidence of the news by journalists. Citizens of a country have to believe the newsperson as they provide proof for certain news by indulging themselves into a particular situation risking their lives. Firstly, the journalists gather all the information from their surroundings on various fields and present it to the public by different ways. However, there are some news which provide false data alluring people to believe but, it is done majorly by media owners and not by the journalists. Correspondents are the only people who makes the whole world aware about various events occurring in different fields by retrieving information in any situation. It requires a brave heart to perform task activities which include danger to one' s life. A good journalist should have an intelligent mind to disclose the truth of the news. Newsman should be ready to face any kind of difficult situation in order to get substantial data. For example, recently in India, kerala state has faced hazardous natural calamity of floods so, many journalists went their to help people and made it alive to the whole world about the problem. To put it in a nutshell, journalists act as a messenger who delivers the news from various sources to each and every house all over the world. While, there are some exceptions about the reliability of the news but journalists provide empirical evidence for worthiness of the information.
Awareness about the recent
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events
occurring all around the
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world
reaches each and every
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house
through media like
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news
channels, newspapers and radio.
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People
receive the
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information
about
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current
affairs from these medias
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but
are skeptical about its reliability. This essay establishes the fact about worthiness of the
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journalists
and the qualities required to be a
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good
correspondent.

News related to any field
is captured
by
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journalists
with their talent and
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hard
work.
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People
having doubts about the credence of the
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news
can
be assured
by providing empirical evidence of the
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news
by
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journalists
. Citizens of a country
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have to
believe the
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newsperson
as they provide proof for certain
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news
by indulging themselves into a particular situation risking their
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lives
.
Firstly
, the
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journalists
gather all the
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information
from their surroundings on various fields and present it to the public by
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different
ways.
However
, there are
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some
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news
which provide false data alluring
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people
to believe
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but
, it
is done
majorly
by media owners and not by the journalists.

Correspondents are the
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people
who
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makes
the whole
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world
aware about various
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events
occurring in
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different
fields by retrieving
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information
in any situation. It requires a brave heart to perform task activities which include
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danger
to
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one&
#039; s life. A
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good
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journalist
should have an intelligent mind to disclose the truth of the
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news
. Newsman should be ready to face any kind of difficult situation in order to
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get
substantial data.
For example
, recently in India,
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kerala
state has faced hazardous natural calamity of floods
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so
,
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many
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journalists
went their to
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help
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people
and made it alive to the whole
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world
about the problem.

To put it in a nutshell,
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journalists
act as a messenger who delivers the
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news
from various sources to each and every
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house
all over the
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world
. While, there are
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some
exceptions about the reliability of the
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news
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but
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journalists
provide empirical evidence for worthiness of the
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information
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays people get information through news and papers but meanwhile are uncertain about the truth of these news Should we believe the journalists What qualities should a good journalist or a correspondent have v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
321 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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