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University should require every graduation students to take public speaking courses. Give examples and details to support your answer. v.1

University should require every graduation students to take public speaking courses. Give examples and details to support your answer. v. 1
Yesterday at my Russian class at the university the professor said that the ability to speak coherently and logically is one of the important skills required by employees. She also promotes the idea to make public speaking courses as required for all graduate students. In my personal opinion, this is a good idea and I support it, because I believe that students must present their ideas and thoughts via words properly. First of all, such courses will bring a lot of advantages for students as future workers. When they have a job interview, they will make a greater impression on their possible employees. When a person uses right words, synonyms, build sentences correctly, it always attracts other people. This way, students can increase their chances to find a well-paid job by showing these skills. Moreover, during their education graduate students are required to present the results of their research publically. As my professor says to make a good talk in front of big audience is the art. In the beginning of my education, every time I had a talk, I was very nervous and could hardly stand. I did not know where put my hands, which pose was better and other aspects which are important for being a good speaker. In their turn, such public speaking courses would be a good practice for students to get a feedback on their talks and to know how to have a talk more properly. But even if a student does not intent to participate in conferences or to have a job which requires having a talk, I still think that the courses will be useful. First of all, they will raise the general level of education, and students may use oral skills to make an impression on other people in their everyday life. Students will be more confident when they talk. For example, I was a shy person at my first university year, because my vocabulary was quite limited, but public speaking helped me to get this confidence. To sum up, based on the arguments I provided in my essay, I think that such courses are necessary for graduate students, that’s why universities should think about including them into their education syllabuses.
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is one of the
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important
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skills
required by employees. She
also
promotes the
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idea
to
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make
public speaking
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courses
as required for all graduate
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students
. In my personal opinion, this is a
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good
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idea
and I support it,
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I believe that
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students
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must
present their
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ideas
and thoughts via words
properly
.

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, such
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courses
will bring
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a lot of
advantages for
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students
as future workers. When they have a job interview, they will
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make
a greater impression on their possible employees. When a person
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uses
right words, synonyms, build sentences
correctly
, it always attracts other
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people
. This way,
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students
can increase their chances to find a well-paid job by showing these
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skills
.

Moreover
, during their
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education
graduate
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students
are required
to present the results of their research
publically
.
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my professor says to
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in front of
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audience is the art. In the beginning of my
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education
, every time I had a
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talk
, I was
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nervous and could hardly stand. I did not know where put my hands, which pose was better and other aspects which are
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important
for being a
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good
speaker. In their turn, such public speaking
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courses
would be a
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good
practice for
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students
to
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a feedback on their
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talks
and to know how to have a
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talk
more
properly
.

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even if a
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student
does not intent to participate in conferences or to have a job which requires having a
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, I
still
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that the
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courses
will be useful.
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, they will raise the general level of
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, and
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an impression on other
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in their everyday life.
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Students
will be more confident when they
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talk
.
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, I was a shy person at my
first
university year,
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because
my vocabulary was quite limited,
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but
public speaking
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helped
me to
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this confidence.

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that such
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are necessary for graduate
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, that’s why universities should
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about including them into their
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syllabuses.
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IELTS essay University should require every graduation students to take public speaking courses. Give examples and details to support your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
369 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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