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The graph and chart give information and forecast about the vehicle number and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant v.1

The graph and chart give information and forecast about the vehicle number and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020
The importance of rest, to the human being, is the same as other physical needs like food, water, and air. It is very essential to the human body for survival. Some people believe that sleeping is the only way to take a rest, Other emphasizes, regular exercise and playing games help to keep body clam. In this essay, I will scrutinize both the views before establishing any conclusion. On one hand, regular exercise and playing different games helps to keep the body fit and in some instances, they are used for relaxing the body. Daily workouts allow us to forget all the stress and bring back extra energy, Sametime it requires a lot of efforts and only focuses on the specific part of the body. If you want your full body stress free, you have to perform a different set of exercise dedicated to each part. Moreover, the wrong practice could cause an adverse effect and most of the time you must have a fitness trainer with you and it will hamper your budget. Furthermore, people prefer playing games to refresh their body. For example, If someone has a hobby of playing cricket, he would enjoy playing it to reduce strain and mental pressure level. However, playing too much cricket on the same day could cause a negative effect also. On the other hand, Sleeping is a very simple activity, it does not require any effort. Just close your eyes and you can get rid of all your stress, pains and all types of fatigue. From small kid to oldest person all can enjoy its advantages and keep themselves refreshed. In many cases, It was found that sleep cut down your diseases and help in speedy recovery. Moreover, it works as refreshment for full body, no need to focus on each part like in exercise and playing games. It makes all body systems up to date as antivirus does for computer systems. In conclusion, I would say that sleep is the best remedy to keep the body fit and fine. It doesn't have side effect like other means of relaxation also it is free of cost and it is inherent in everybody.
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clam. In this essay, I will scrutinize both the views
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fit and in
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us to forget all the
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free, you
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dedicated to each part.
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practice could cause an adverse effect and most of the time you
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to refresh their
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cricket, he would enjoy
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it to
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strain and mental pressure level.
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too much cricket on the same day could cause a
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also
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simple activity, it does not require any effort.
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close your eyes and you can
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, pains and all types of fatigue. From
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person all can enjoy its advantages and
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themselves refreshed. In
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cases, It
was found
that sleep
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down your diseases and
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in speedy recovery.
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, it works as refreshment for full
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body
, no need to focus on each part like in
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and
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playing
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. It
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makes
all
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systems up to date as antivirus does for computer systems.

In conclusion
, I would say that sleep is the best remedy to
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keep
the
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body
fit and fine. It doesn't have side effect like
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other
means of relaxation
also
it is free of cost and it is inherent in everybody.
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Learning another language is not only learning different words for the same things, but learning another way to think about things.
Flora Lewis

IELTS essay The graph and chart give information and forecast about the vehicle number and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
362 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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