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Using points and examples from the talk, explain why methane gas is the cleanest fuel and why in spite of being the cleanest fuel, it can pose an environmental threat. v.1

Using points and examples from the talk, explain why methane gas is the cleanest fuel and why in spite of being the cleanest fuel, it can pose an environmental threat. v. 1
In India, it has now become a dream of every middle class student to settle in aborad. There are many factors that contribute to this. Whether it is the lifestyle or huge salaries almost every Indian dream of settling in a foreign country. This essay will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country. The main advantage of living in a foreign country is the lifestyle. Everyone is paid according to the amount of work done. There is no discrimination between the workers and you will get paid for the number of hours worked. However, in India, in a private sector organisation, generally the person who does not work much makes more money. For instance, almost every private sector employee works overtime. He is not getting paid according to the hours worked and which makes it more difficult to survive. On the other hand, there are few disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country. Firstly, sometimes, people face racism from the natives. They don't like immigrants coming in their country and stealing all the jobs. Secondly, we need to live far away from our family and friends, and we are not able to attend weddings or celebrate an important occasion. Many people suffer from homesickness when they move to a foreign country. In conclusion, there are many advantages and disadvantages of working and living in a foreign country. In most of the cases, people move to a foreign country to have a better lifestyle. Even though, there are some disadvantages of living in a foreign country, but the advantages clearly prevail over the disadvantages.
In India, it has
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become a dream of every middle
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class
student to settle in
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many
factors that contribute to this. Whether it is the lifestyle or huge salaries almost every Indian dream of settling in a
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foreign
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country
. This essay will
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discuss about the
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advantages
and disadvantages of
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living
and working in a
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foreign
country.

The main
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advantage
of
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living
in a
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foreign
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country
is the lifestyle. Everyone
is paid
according to the amount of work done. There is no discrimination between the workers and you will
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get
paid for the number of hours worked.
However
, in India, in a private sector
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generally
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much
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more money.
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makes
it more difficult to survive.

On the other hand
, there are few disadvantages of
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living
and working in a
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foreign
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.
Firstly
,
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,
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people
face racism from the natives. They don't like immigrants
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and stealing all the jobs.
Secondly
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far away from our family and friends, and we are not able to attend weddings or celebrate an
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occasion.
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In conclusion
, there are
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advantages
and disadvantages of working and
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living
in a
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foreign
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country
. In most of the cases,
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people
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to have a better lifestyle.
Even though
, there are
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some
disadvantages of
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,
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prevail over the disadvantages.
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IELTS essay Using points and examples from the talk, explain why methane gas is the cleanest fuel and why in spite of being the cleanest fuel, it can pose an environmental threat. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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