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The graph and chart give information and forecast about the vehicle and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020. https: //www. testbig. com/sites/default/files/a_4. jpg v.2

The graph and chart give information and forecast about the vehicle and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020. https: //www. testbig. com/sites/default/files/a_4. jpg v. 2
The bar chart and line graph compared the data and prediction about the transportation and different CO2 emission between England and Wales from 2000 to 2020. Overall, the line graph showed the number of the vehicle was increasing from 2000 to 2020. Besides, the bar chart is noticeable that the prediction about emission of vehicles as well as car, bus, van and truck were slightly change every year. As can be seen from the bar graph, the amount of CO2 emssions of car and truck were strikingly higher than other CO2 emssions such as bus and van, the precentages of car emssion started with 20 tons emissions in 2000. Thus, truck were at around 5 tons. Bus waas accounting to under 10 tons from 2000 to 2020. Continous, the amount of different vehicles such as car, van and truck increased in 2010, at around 23 tons, 14, 5 tons and 13 tons, respectively. In 2020, the amount of CO2 emssion in tons from car is increasing which has the highest amount, at around 26 tons of emission following to the emission of truck which is lower than the amount of car emission, and truck is at around 23, 5 tons. In line graph, the number of vehicles started at around 20 million in 2000. After that, it was slightly climb from 20 to under 50 million from 2000 to 2015. In 2020, the number of vehicles is reaching to 50, 5 million.
The bar chart and line
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compared the data and prediction about the transportation and
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CO2
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emission
between England and Wales from 2000 to 2020.

Overall
, the line
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the number of the
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vehicle
was increasing from 2000 to 2020.
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, the bar chart is noticeable that the prediction about
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emission
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vehicles
as well
as
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car
, bus, van and
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truck
were
slightly
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change
every year.

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, the
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and
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were
strikingly
higher than other CO2
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such as bus and van, the
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precentages
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with 20 tons
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in 2000.
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,
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truck
were at
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around
5 tons. Bus
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accounting to under 10 tons from 2000 to 2020.
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increased in 2010, at
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23 tons, 14, 5 tons and 13 tons,
respectively
. In 2020, the
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emssion
in tons from
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car
is increasing which has the highest
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, at
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26 tons of
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following to the
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truck
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car
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, and
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is at
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23, 5 tons.

In line
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, the number of
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vehicles
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started
at
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around
20 million in 2000. After that, it was
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from 20 to under 50 million from 2000 to 2015. In 2020, the number of
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vehicles
is reaching to 50, 5 million.
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37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The graph and chart give information and forecast about the vehicle and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020. https: //www. testbig. com/sites/default/files/a_4. jpg v. 2

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242 words
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