Some people believe that children at an early age should be provided the basis to understand the difference between right and wrong, and also they would have to penalty while doing this. I completely disagree with this view because I believe that children can be raised without punishment.
On the one hand, I accept that families have an obligation to express right and wrong behaviours to their own children in some way. They should this because each child will be an individual in our society in the future, and as they can be a beneficial person to society, their parents must bring up them based on morality. In other words, childhood is a considerable time period of human life in order to lay the foundations for being a moral person.
On the other hand, while some people consider punishment necessary to learn these, I think that families should prefer to reward their children rather than punish them. For instance, parents can promise to buy more toys to get a child adopt to the habit of sharing her/his toys with their friends. People who have a child can apply sanction at the point where rewarding is insufficient. They should not resort to violence like physical or psychological harm to teach being a good person to their own children.
In conclusion, it must be said that gaining children moral behaviour is a topic which is very relevant to our society. I believe quite strongly that children can be taught good conduct encouragingly.
Some
people
believe that
children
at an early age should
be provided
the basis to understand the difference between right and
wrong
, and
also
they would
have to
penalty while doing this. I completely disagree with this view
because
I believe that
children
can
be raised
without punishment.
On the one hand, I accept that families have an obligation to express right and
wrong
behaviours
to their
own
children
in
some
way. They should this
because
each child will be an individual in our society in the future, and as they can be a beneficial person to society, their parents
must
bring up them based on morality.
In other words
, childhood is a considerable time period of human life in order to lay the foundations for being a moral person.
On the other hand
, while
some
people
consider punishment necessary to learn these, I
think
that families should prefer to reward their
children
rather
than punish them.
For instance
, parents can promise to
buy
more toys to
get
a child
adopt to
the habit of sharing her/his toys with their friends.
People
who have a child can apply sanction at the point where rewarding is insufficient. They should not resort to violence like physical or psychological harm to teach being a
good
person to their
own
children.
In conclusion
, it
must
be said
that gaining
children
moral
behaviour
is a topic which is
very
relevant to our society. I believe quite
strongly
that
children
can
be taught
good
conduct
encouragingly
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes