The government and individuals are spending too much money on national celebrations like new year or festivals. Do you agree or disagree? v.3
The government and individuals are spending too much money on national celebrations like new year or festivals. v. 3
People have different views about whether public expenditure on national occasions such as new year or festivals is too much nowadays. While I agree that governments and individuals are spending a significant amount of money on those celebrations, I would argue that this activity is necessary and therefore can be considered acceptable.
It is true that a large amount of money is currently spent on some important celebrations of a country. Firstly, governments is spending a proportion of their budget on holding events to celebrate these occasions. For example, much money is being paid for fireworks on New Year’s eve in many countries around the world. Secondly, individuals also spend money to have celebrations and parties with their families, which is a common habit in many areas. For instance, my parents and I often have a special dinner on the final day of every year.
However, I believe there are great benefits of public spending on national celebrations, and therefore it is completely justifiable. The first advantage is that this is a great way to preserve the culture of a nation. To illustrate, Lunar New Year is an important part of the Vietnamese culture, and holding celebrations for this occasion is necessary to remind younger generations of this tradition. Additionally, since these occasions are usually the only times for family members to have time and enjoy together, it is understandable that people would want to spend money on something that makes them happy. Finally, as there are only a few national celebrations in a year, the amount of money spent on those days is unlikely to be too much.
In conclusion, I disagree with the idea that people and governments are spending too much money on national occasions.
People
have
different
views about whether public expenditure on
national
occasions
such as new
year
or festivals is too much nowadays. While I
agree
that
governments
and individuals are
spending
a significant amount of
money
on those
celebrations
, I would argue that this activity is necessary and
therefore
can
be considered
acceptable.
It is true that a large amount of
money
is
currently
spent on
some
important
celebrations
of a country.
Firstly
,
governments
is
spending
a proportion of their budget on holding
events
to celebrate these
occasions
.
For example
, much
money
is
being paid
for fireworks on New
Year’s
eve in
many
countries around the world.
Secondly
, individuals
also
spend
money
to have
celebrations
and parties with their families, which is a common habit in
many
areas.
For instance
, my parents and I
often
have a special dinner on the final day of every year.
However
, I believe there are great benefits of public
spending
on
national
celebrations
, and
therefore
it is completely justifiable. The
first
advantage is that this is a great way to preserve the culture of a nation. To illustrate, Lunar New
Year
is an
important
part of the Vietnamese culture, and holding
celebrations
for this
occasion
is necessary to remind younger generations of this tradition.
Additionally
, since these
occasions
are
usually
the
only
times for family members to have time and enjoy together, it is understandable that
people
would want to spend
money
on something that
makes
them happy.
Finally
, as there are
only
a few
national
celebrations
in a
year
, the amount of
money
spent on those days is unlikely to be too much.
In conclusion
, I disagree with the
idea
that
people
and
governments
are
spending
too much
money
on
national
occasions
.
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