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The given bar graphs show the extent of cash that individuals in France, Germany and England spent on nourishment and different items in 1998 and 2008. v.1

The given bar graphs show the extent of cash that individuals in France, Germany and England spent on nourishment and different items in 1998 and 2008. v. 1
Art represents the various forms of human activities in the form of visuals, literary and performing artefacts. Is visual movies' model less dominant than other forms of art? This has become a contentious issue. I personally feel that feature films are as considerable as documentations and illustrations. Rather, they are proving to be more vigorously accepted pattern in the modern world. In this essay we will contend for this argument and will draw an inference. Written forms and drawings have represented the cultures of many countries since decades. People travel to places to explore these nation specific skills. Moreover, these enhance the beauty of any community and represent that association in an international forum. For instance, to visit the famous painting of The Monalisa is a dream of many people in the world. But, on the other hand feature films have helped these other forms to be represented to the world in style of running images and background voice. Movies have gained recent popularity, as it represents other forms also played by various actors and represented in the plan of a story, that could represent a culture of any country. To illustrate, various awards have been introduced to acknowledge this style and every year events are arranged on a large scale to promote various individuals taking part in featured films To recapitulate, having mulled over the above stated arguments and information, and deliberating all the facts, it can be deducted that feature films have emerged as an essential style of art, as another ones like writing forms and paintings. I strongly contend that making films enhance nations' representation of its skills.
Art
represents
the
various
forms
of human activities in the
form
of visuals, literary and performing
artefacts
. Is visual movies' model less dominant than
other
forms
of art? This has become a contentious issue. I
personally
feel that feature films are as considerable as documentations and illustrations.
Rather
, they are proving to be more
vigorously
accepted
pattern in the modern world. In this essay we will contend for this argument and will draw an inference.

Written
forms
and drawings have represented the cultures of
many
countries since decades.
People
travel to places to explore
these nation
specific
skills
.
Moreover
, these enhance the beauty of any community and
represent
that association in an international forum.
For instance
, to visit the
famous
painting of The
Monalisa
is a dream of
many
people
in the world.

But
, on the
other
hand feature films have
helped
these
other
forms
to
be represented
to the world in style of running images and background voice. Movies have gained recent popularity, as it
represents
other
forms
also
played by
various
actors and represented in the plan of a story, that could
represent
a culture of any country. To illustrate,
various
awards have
been introduced
to acknowledge this style and every year
events
are arranged
on a large scale to promote
various
individuals taking part in featured
films


To recapitulate, having mulled over the above stated arguments and information, and deliberating all the facts, it can
be deducted
that feature films have emerged as an essential style of art, as another ones like writing
forms
and paintings. I
strongly
contend that making films enhance nations' representation of its
skills
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The given bar graphs show the extent of cash that individuals in France, Germany and England spent on nourishment and different items in 1998 and 2008. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
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