Difference between wealthy and underprivileged is indeed expanding day by day. This essay will cover two areas: problems of this situation, which consist of not only individuals forced towards crime, but also die from starvation; and its solutions, which include built good schools and colleges and create more jobs.
To begin with the problems, one essential problem is middle class and lower level people could die from hunger. These people do not have much opportunity to earn and almost nothing to feed to their families or fulfil their basic needs which causes starvation. Secondly, people can forced to do wrongdoing due to lack of money. People do not have jobs which pay them well and everyone want to earn money. Therefore, sometime people think about shortcuts and do scandal unwillingly.
On the flip side, to tackle these problems, the government should provide quality schooling at all levels and places. They can build better schools and universities and provide training to poor people so they can learn and earn well after studies. Another important point is, big corporates should create more jobs so a large number of people can get jobs and earn enough to become rich. For example, Singapore, which was a poor fishing village in the nineteenth century, is the centre of economy in the world after 50 years because they invested in their education system.
To conclude, People could die from hunger and move towards crime are the problems because of the gap between rich and them. Although these problems government should provide quality education and create more jobs.
Difference between wealthy and underprivileged is
indeed
expanding day by day. This essay will cover two areas:
problems
of this situation, which consist of not
only
individuals forced towards crime,
but
also
die
from starvation; and its solutions, which include built
good
schools and colleges and create more jobs.
To
begin
with the
problems
, one essential
problem
is middle
class
and lower level
people
could
die
from hunger. These
people
do not have much opportunity to
earn
and almost nothing to feed to their families or fulfil their basic needs which causes starvation.
Secondly
,
people
can forced to do wrongdoing due to lack of money.
People
do not have
jobs
which pay them well and everyone
want
to
earn
money.
Therefore
, sometime
people
think
about shortcuts and do scandal
unwillingly
.
On the flip side, to tackle these
problems
, the
government
should provide quality schooling at all levels and places. They can build better schools and universities and provide training to poor
people
so
they can learn and
earn
well after studies. Another
important
point is,
big
corporates
should create more
jobs
so
a large number of
people
can
get
jobs
and
earn
enough
to become rich.
For example
, Singapore, which was a poor fishing village in the nineteenth century, is the
centre
of economy in the world after 50 years
because
they invested in their education system.
To conclude
,
People
could
die
from hunger and
move
towards crime are the
problems
because
of the gap between rich and them. Although these
problems
government
should provide quality education and create more
jobs
.
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