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The funds for postgraduate research are limited; therefore some people think that the government should provide financial support. In their opinion, only scientific research should be funded, rather than other less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

The funds for postgraduate research are limited; therefore some people think that the government should provide financial support. In their opinion, only scientific research should be funded, rather than other less useful subjects. v. 1
Owing to the limited availability of state funds. It is being argued that governments should only help financially to those students who are in scientific programs. I dissent the release of education funds to science courses only rather I believe government must try to sport every postgraduate course Admittedly, it is imperative to fund the scientific programs of postgraduate. As these study areas can enrich the current scientific knowledge of postgraduate, it makes them highly inventive in term of a technology to carry out new inventions. For example, only scientific and knowledge has made it possible to explore other distinct planets like Mars in recent years. Similarly, an advanced medical study has profound impact on human life in the term of health which can be seen from the improvement in life expectancy, so expecting to finance it is not a meaningless Idea However, the state should always subsidise other non-scientific postgraduate degrees such as economics and literature. For instance, the former study courses produce futuristic political economists who can better analysis of the finances of a country. Eventually, they may help in making new politicians to prevent upcoming economical cripples and making a country economically stronger. Likewise, literature and culture courses cannot be neglected for giving monetary help. Because it not only spreads the sense of brotherhood, but also keeps people attached to their roots, which results in the secured social fabric of Civilization In conclusion, while due to the inadequate educational budget, I accept that money should be allocated to the scientific research, I also believe that educational funding would not go to waste where it invested in the other research courses in tertiary education.
Owing to the limited availability of state funds. It is
being argued
that
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governments
should
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only
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help
financially
to those students who are in
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scientific
programs. I dissent the release of education funds to science
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courses
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only
rather
I believe
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government
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must
try to sport every
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postgraduate
course

Admittedly
, it is imperative to fund the
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scientific
programs of
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postgraduate
. As these study areas can enrich the
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current
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scientific
knowledge of
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postgraduate
, it
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makes
them
highly
inventive in term of a technology to carry out new inventions.
For example
,
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only
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scientific
and knowledge has made it possible to explore other distinct planets like Mars in recent years.
Similarly
, an advanced medical study has profound impact on human life in the term of health which can be
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seen
from the improvement in life expectancy,
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so
expecting to finance it is not a meaningless
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Idea


However
, the state should always
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subsidise
other non-scientific
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postgraduate
degrees such as economics and literature.
For instance
, the former study
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courses
produce futuristic political economists who can better analysis of the finances of a country.
Eventually
, they may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in making new politicians to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
upcoming economical cripples and making a country
economically
stronger.
Likewise
, literature and culture
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courses
cannot
be neglected
for giving monetary
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help
.
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Because
it not
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only
spreads the sense of brotherhood,
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but
also
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keeps
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people
attached to their roots, which results in the secured social fabric of
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Civilization


In conclusion
, while due to the inadequate educational budget, I accept that money should
be allocated
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
scientific
research, I
also
believe that educational funding would not go to waste where it invested in the other research
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
in tertiary education.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay The funds for postgraduate research are limited; therefore some people think that the government should provide financial support. In their opinion, only scientific research should be funded, rather than other less useful subjects. v. 1

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
276 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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