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Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with th v.1

Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. with th v. 1
It is argued that humans will be replaced by artificial intelligence in the field of teaching. This essay disagrees with that statement because computers cannot provide feedback to students. Online classes led by teachers can be a possible alternative to traditional classroom learning. Although technology has advanced greatly, it still hasn't equipped computers with the ability to talk to students and give them feedback. Each student has a different level of thinking and understanding and hence, they must receive proper feedback to improve themselves. Artificial intelligence cannot be used to perform this task because it can only give generalized corrections of errors but cannot tell a student how they can do better. For example, Writing9 is an online writing tool that can check and correct spelling and grammatical mistakes, but it cannot help students improve their writing. Alternatively, classroom teaching can be substituted with online courses. Online learning has a greater reach and is available to thousands of students all over the world. This gives students the opportunity to access some of the best teachers that are available and even receive corrections on their mistakes. For instance, some of the best colleges, like Harvard, have introduced free online courses on their official website that can be attended by anyone and any doubts that they might have can be clarified by certified educators over web chat. In conclusion, technology hasn't reached a stage where humans can be replaced by artificial intelligence in schools because it cannot give students the customized corrections that they need to improve, and online courses are a possible solution to traditional classroom learning.
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is argued
that humans will
be replaced
by artificial intelligence in the field of teaching. This essay disagrees with that statement
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because
computers cannot provide feedback to
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students
.
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Online
classes led by teachers can be a possible alternative to traditional classroom learning.

Although technology has advanced
greatly
, it
still
hasn't equipped computers with the ability to talk to
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students
and
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give
them feedback. Each
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student
has a
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different
level of thinking and understanding and
hence
, they
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must
receive proper feedback to
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improve
themselves. Artificial intelligence cannot be
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used
to perform this task
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because
it can
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only
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give
generalized corrections of errors
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but
cannot
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tell
a
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student
how they can do better.
For example
, Writing9 is an
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online
writing tool that can
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check
and correct spelling and grammatical mistakes,
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but
it cannot
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help
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students
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improve
their writing.

Alternatively
, classroom teaching can
be substituted
with
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online
courses.
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Online
learning has a greater reach and is available to thousands of
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students
all over the world. This
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gives
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students
the opportunity to access
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of the best teachers that are available and even receive corrections on their mistakes.
For instance
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of the best colleges, like Harvard, have introduced free
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
courses on their official website that can
be attended
by anyone and any doubts that they might have can
be clarified
by certified educators over web chat.

In conclusion
, technology hasn't reached a stage where humans can
be replaced
by artificial intelligence in schools
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because
it cannot
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give
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
the customized corrections that they need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
, and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
courses are a possible solution to traditional classroom learning.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. with th v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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