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Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with th v.2

Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. with th v. 2
It is inevitable fact that results from scientific research is revolutionary. Yet the fact that funding for postgraduate research is limited cannot be overlook. Some people argue that financial support should not be given for scientific research & should not be wasted on less useful projects like arts or history. I disagree to this debate since other research fields are also important & certainly add a good value in our life. To begin with, the value addition of scientific research cannot be denied, these research has revolutionized our lives. The prominent example is the invention of computers that has changed our life altogether. The way we communicate, do business has been newly formalized with the use of computers. Time saving, efficient device that helps us in almost every field of life. Another start example of scientific research is invention of light. In today’s world we cannot imagine to live without electricity which is only possible due to great amount of research done & great inventors of that time. On the contrary, the importance of other research could not be neglected such as arts & different languages of previous era. By investing time & money in history & arts we have learnt enormous things. Pot making, cutlery making was initiated in ancient times. Also by investing on history research we can learn from our mistakes such as damage done by World War 1 & 2 & how it could be prevented. What war strategies that worked & what failed. To recapitulate this argument, I completely favor the idea of investing in all sort of research field be it scientific, history or art. They may differ in terms of their value addition but holds importance
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scientific
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research
is revolutionary.
Yet
the fact that funding for postgraduate
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is limited
cannot be
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overlook
.
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Some
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people
argue that financial support should not be
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given
for
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scientific
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research
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&amp
; should not
be wasted
on less useful projects like
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arts
or
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history
. I disagree to this debate since other
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research
fields are
also
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important
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&amp
;
certainly
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add
a
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good
value in our life.

To
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begin
with, the value addition of
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scientific
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research
cannot
be denied
, these
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has revolutionized our
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lives
. The prominent example is the invention of computers that has
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changed
our life altogether. The way we communicate, do business has been
newly
formalized with the
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use
of computers. Time saving, efficient device that
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helps
us in almost every field of life. Another
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start
example of
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scientific
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is invention of light. In
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today
’s world we cannot imagine to
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live
without electricity which is
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only
possible due to great amount of
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done
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&amp
; great inventors of that time.

On the contrary
, the importance of other
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could not
be neglected
such as
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arts
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&amp
;
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different
languages of previous era. By investing time
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&amp
; money in
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history
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&amp
;
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arts
we have
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learnt
enormous things. Pot making, cutlery making
was initiated
in ancient times.
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Also
by investing on
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history
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research
we can learn from our mistakes such as damage done by World War 1
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&amp
; 2
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&amp
; how it could be
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prevented
. What war strategies that worked
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&amp
; what failed.

To recapitulate this argument, I completely favor the
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idea
of investing in all sort of
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field be it
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scientific
,
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history
or
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art
. They may differ in terms of their value addition
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but
holds
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importance
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes
He who knows no foreign languages knows nothing of his own.
Johann Wolfgang von Goethe

IELTS essay Money for postgraduate research is limited. Some people, therefore, think that financial support from government should be only provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. with th v. 2

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