There is no even a shadow of doubt technology has revolutionized in each and every field. Nowadays people can do work anywhere they want and they can accommodate anywhere. This essay will discuss the advantages and shortcomings of this phenomenon.
On the one hand, there are ample advantages of this, firstly, people do not need to go anywhere because they can complete their work setting at any with the help of computer. And, they can easily reach at any place in a few hours and people also can migrate toward good places, where lot of facilities available such as good education, transportation and health regard facilities.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages of this which we can not overlooked. Firstly, it cause lot of pollution problems occur because people use private vehicles to approach any place.
To conclude, according to my point of view everything has some pros and cons just like medical pills have side effects. But its advantages outweigh on its disadvantages.
There is no even a shadow of doubt technology has revolutionized in each and every field. Nowadays
people
can do work anywhere they
want and
they can accommodate anywhere. This essay will discuss the advantages and shortcomings of this phenomenon.
On the one hand, there are ample advantages of this,
firstly
,
people
do not need to go anywhere
because
they can complete their work setting at any with the
help
of computer. And, they can
easily
reach at any place in a few hours and
people
also
can migrate toward
good
places, where lot of facilities available such as
good
education, transportation and health regard facilities.
On the other hand
, there are
some
disadvantages of this which we can not
overlooked
.
Firstly
, it
cause
lot of
pollution problems occur
because
people
use
private vehicles to approach any place.
To conclude
, according to my point of view everything has
some
pros and cons
just
like medical pills have side effects.
But
its advantages outweigh on its disadvantages.
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