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The development of tourism contributed English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. what are the advantages and disadvantages of having one language in the world? v.2

The development of tourism contributed English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. what are the advantages and disadvantages of having one language in the world? v. 2
The English language has become the most used languages in the world because of the development on tourism sector. Some individuals say that this would make English language the only way to communicate worldwide. This essay will first suggest the easier communication between the citizens of different nations is the primary benefit, while the possibility of having certain languages disappear is a major drawback of having single global language. Making single language a global tool to communicate makes the communication convenient between people from different linguistic backgrounds. This is to say that people do not have to worry about the language barrier when they travel different parts of the world because everyone speaks the same words. Additionally, they can easily adapt the circumstances as there will be very less chance to get confused about others' perception. For example, countries like New Zealand, Canada, Australia and the UK have made the knowledge of English language mandatory for those who wants to immigrate there, because they believe that immigrants would not face any difficulties while communicating if they know the common-tongue. Despite the benefit of easy communication, single-global-language system could lead many languages from different communities to disappear from the world. This means, since only one language would be in operation, people would be reluctant to learn other languages because their limited applications. As a result, many languages that are in operation from the ancient times would extinct from the planet. For example, a recent study conducted by the BBC News revealed that every month 10 less-spoken languages are being extinct from our planet because many nations are widely practiced commonly used languages as their communication tool. In conclusion, the convenience in communication with the use of one common language is the primary merit of single-global-language system, but the extinction of other languages from different communities around the world is its major demerit.
The English
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English
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way to communicate worldwide. This essay will
first
suggest the easier
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communication
between the citizens of
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different
nations is the primary benefit, while the possibility of having certain
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languages
disappear is a major drawback of having single global language.

Making single
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language
a global tool to communicate
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makes
the
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communication
convenient between
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people
from
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different
linguistic backgrounds. This is to say that
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people
do not
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have to
worry about the
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barrier when they travel
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different
parts of the
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world
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because
everyone speaks the same words.
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, they can
easily
adapt the circumstances as there will be
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less chance to
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get
confused about others' perception.
For example
, countries like New Zealand, Canada, Australia and the UK have made the knowledge of English
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language
mandatory for those who wants to immigrate there,
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because
they believe that immigrants would not face any difficulties while communicating if they know the common-tongue.

Despite the benefit of easy
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communication
, single-global-language system could lead
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many
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languages
from
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different
communities to disappear from the
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world
. This means, since
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only
one
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language
would be in operation,
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people
would be reluctant to learn other
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languages
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because
their limited applications.
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,
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many
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languages
that are in operation from the ancient times would extinct from the planet.
For example
, a recent study conducted by the BBC News revealed that every month 10 less-spoken
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languages
are being extinct from our planet
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because
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many
nations are
widely
practiced
commonly
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used
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languages
as their
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communication
tool.

In conclusion
, the convenience in
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communication
with the
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use
of one common
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language
is the primary merit of single-global-language system,
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but
the extinction of other
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languages
from
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different
communities around the
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world
is its major demerit.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Knowledge of languages is the doorway to wisdom.
Roger Bacon

IELTS essay The development of tourism contributed English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. what are the advantages and disadvantages of having one language in the world? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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