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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. So people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world? v.3

The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. So people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world? v. 3
The rapid development of the tourism industry has led to English becoming the most spoken language in the world. People are concerned that English will turn into the only language that is spoken all over the world. In this essay the merits and demerits of having a one common language will be discussed. One of the advantages to speak the same language with the whole world is the full understanding of each other. As English is a widespread language, it is the best choice to be the common language for lots of nations. For example, if a Russian-speaking and a Chinese-speaking persons meet, they may not achieve mutual understanding unless they both know English. Another merit of English becoming the most popular language is the absence of the cross-cultural gap, as the content consumption of people who know English well enough is about the same. They all watch the same films, listen to the same music and read the same books. As a result, when two people who grew in different countries they can easily find subjects to be discussed. However, the extremely wide dissemination of English language leads to the degradation of national identity. In an effort to use English as much as possible, and thereby to become global citizens, people forget or distort their native language. For example, the majority of Russian teenagers uses a lot of English slang while texting, Internet posting and etc. , however, most of the loan words can be easily replaced by authentic Russian words. To draw a conclusion, English becoming the international level language leads to such positive outcomes as better communication and same cultural background. Nevertheless, the native languages must also be preserved. To avoid the language disappearance, It is recommended that English learners should show equal respect to their mother tongue.
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language
in the world.
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are concerned
that English will turn into the
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only
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language
that
is spoken
all over the world. In this essay the merits and demerits of having a one common
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language
will
be discussed
.

One of the advantages to speak the same
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language
with the whole world is the full understanding of each other. As English is a widespread
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language
, it is the best choice to be the common
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language
for lots of nations.
For example
, if a Russian-speaking and a Chinese-speaking persons
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meet
, they may not achieve mutual understanding unless they both know English.

Another merit of English becoming the most popular
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language
is the absence of the cross-cultural gap, as the content consumption of
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people
who know English well
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enough
is about the same. They all
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watch
the same films, listen to the same music and read the same books.
As a result
, when two
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people
who grew in
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different
countries they can
easily
find subjects to
be discussed
.

However
, the
extremely
wide dissemination of English
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language
leads to the degradation of national identity. In an effort to
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use
English as much as possible, and thereby to become global citizens,
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people
forget or distort their native
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language
.
For example
, the majority of Russian
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teenagers
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uses
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a lot of
English slang while texting, Internet posting
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and etc
.
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,
however
, most of the loan words can be
easily
replaced by authentic Russian words.

To draw a conclusion, English becoming the international level
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language
leads to such
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positive
outcomes as better communication and same cultural background.
Nevertheless
, the native
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languages
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must
also
be preserved
. To avoid the
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language
disappearance, It
is recommended
that English learners should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
equal respect to their mother tongue.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. So people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world? v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
301 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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