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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion? v.24

Additional requirements of new houses are increasing day by day in some part of the world which can be only built in countryside due to over-crowded cities. Many would argue that it is significant not to build house in coutryside to maintain the natural environment. In my opinion, over population, peaceful environment, and farmers'choice are some of the factors which insist to make new houses in countryside. In this essay, I will first outline all these factors followed by my opposite perspective. On the whole, population is increasing day by day. As a result, the cities are becoming crowded. To accomodate the people, builders have to build houses in the remaining places of the country. In addition to this, some of them like to stay in a peaceful environment away from hectic & fast city life. These are the types of people who prefer country side houses. Largly, the country like India from where I am, is already facing an issue of scarcity of required landscapes. To compensate it, mankind is diverting towards country side in building new houses. Moreover, some of the farmers have a plenty of land available for farming and that is the only source of income for them. They also have to tack care continuously for their fertile land. In order to maintain the farming, these are the types of human beings who tend to prefer houses in the countryside near by their farms. On the other side, people must not foregt to maintain the natural beauty of the countryside. There must be certain void spaces available which should be never occupied by humans for their own sake. Instead of building the houses, the countrysides must be developed for an ideal natural tourist spots. In conclusion, the country's people should occupy the space in countryside very carefully. I strongly believe that the aforementioned are some of the important factors which insist in building the new houses in countryside. Simultaneously, such natural places must be very well maintained. Goverments must provide administrative controls so that the people can not occupy all the availabe spaces within countryside.
Additional requirements of
new
houses
are increasing day by day in
some
part of the world which can be
only
built

in
countryside
due to over-crowded cities.
Many
would argue that it is significant not to build
house
in
coutryside


to maintain the
natural
environment. In my opinion, over population, peaceful environment, and farmers'choice are
some


of the factors which insist to
make
new
houses
in
countryside
. In this essay, I will
first
outline all these factors

followed by my opposite perspective.

On the whole
, population is increasing day by day.
As a result
, the cities are becoming crowded. To
accomodate
the

people
, builders
have to
build
houses
in the remaining places of the country.
In addition
to this,
some
of them like

to stay in a peaceful environment away from hectic &
fast
city life. These are the types of
people
who prefer
country side
houses
.
Largly
, the country like India from where I am, is already facing an issue of scarcity of required

landscapes
. To compensate it, mankind is diverting towards
country side
in building
new
houses
.

Moreover
,
some of the
farmers have a
plenty
of land available for farming and
that is
the
only
source of income for

them. They
also
have to
tack care
continuously
for their fertile land. In order to maintain the farming, these are the

types of human beings who tend to prefer
houses
in the
countryside
near by
their farms.

On the other side,
people
must
not
foregt
to maintain the
natural
beauty of the
countryside
. There
must
be certain void

spaces available which should be never occupied by humans for their
own
sake.
Instead
of building the
houses
, the

countrysides
must
be developed
for an ideal
natural
tourist spots.

In conclusion
, the country's
people
should occupy the space in
countryside
very
carefully
. I
strongly
believe that

the aforementioned are
some
of the
important
factors which insist in building the
new
houses
in countryside.

Simultaneously
, such
natural
places
must
be
very
well maintained.
Goverments
must
provide administrative controls
so


that
the
people
can not occupy all the
availabe
spaces within
countryside
.
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IELTS essay In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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  American English
8 paragraphs
349 words
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