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The charts below show temperature and rainfall in the Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words v.1

The charts below show temperature and rainfall in the Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate
Reading news and magazines online is becoming increasingly common nowadays. Some people opine that online books and magazines will completely eliminate the traditional newspaper and magazines. I strongly agree with this statement. There are numerous benefits of reading ebooks and Magazines. To begin with, online paper report news a lot faster than regular paper which means you don't have to wait for the latest news to be printed and available to you the next morning. In fact, latest news available to you whenever anything is reported anywhere around the world. Online news is updated every single minute which means you will never be out of the loop on current news updates. To add further, online journals provide you the variety and in-depth insights on the topics of your interest. For instance, if you interested in cricket, you can access websites/apps dedicated to cricket only. Furthermore, It provides you convenience as most of the office going people have less time in the morning to read paper, with the e-books they can read them anytime on their mobile or office laptops as per their schedule. For example, while travelling you can keep yourself informed by reading the e-paper. On the downside, reading an e-book has a strong dependency on a good internet connection, Which means to access the world wide web you should have a high speed internet connection. You have to spend extra amount per month for a high speed broadband or mobile internet connection as a result of which your monthly expenses may increase. To conclude, online newspapers or journals save money and continuously updating you about the latest updates and also provide in-depth information on any topic.
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common nowadays.
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people
opine that
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books and
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magazines
will completely eliminate the traditional newspaper and
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magazines
. I
strongly
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agree
with this statement.

There are numerous benefits of
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ebooks
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. To
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begin
with,
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online
paper report
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news
a lot faster than regular paper which means you don't
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have to
wait for the latest
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news
to
be printed
and available to you the
next
morning. In fact,
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latest
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news
available to you whenever anything
is reported
anywhere around the world.
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Online
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news
is updated
every single minute which means you will never be out of the loop on
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current
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news
updates. To
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add
further
,
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online
journals provide you the variety and in-depth insights on the topics of your interest.
For instance
, if you interested in cricket, you can access websites/apps dedicated to cricket
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only
.

Furthermore
, It provides you convenience as most of the office going
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people
have less time in the morning to read paper, with the e-books they can read them anytime on their mobile or office laptops as per their schedule.
For example
, while travelling you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
yourself informed by
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reading
the e-paper.

On the downside,
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reading
an e-book has a strong dependency on a
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good
internet connection,

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Which
means to access the
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world wide web
you should have a high speed internet connection. You
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have to
spend extra amount per month for a high speed broadband or mobile internet connection
as a result
of which your monthly expenses may increase.

To conclude
,
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online
newspapers or journals save money and
continuously
updating you about the latest updates and
also
provide in-depth information on any topic.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay The charts below show temperature and rainfall in the Equatorial climate and Mediterranean climate

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
278 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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