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The charts below illustrate the average bed use in three typical hospitals internationally and the proportion of hospital budgets allocated to in-patient care before and after day-surgery was introduced in 2003. v.1

The charts below illustrate the average bed use in three typical hospitals internationally and the proportion of hospital budgets allocated to in-patient care before and after day-surgery was introduced in 2003. v. 1
In today's era media has so much independence than ever before. Media is telecasting negative side of the society more than positive on. In this regard, some people believe that it has a detrimental effect on local communities and community. This essay will discuss why I completely agree with this proposition. News and talk shows mainly focusing on political issues and poor law and order situation of the country due to this overall image of the country would damage. Although it is necessary to talk about the basic issues such as political uncertainty and poor rules and, regulations, but frequently highlighting these issues will result in a decrease in the number of tourists which have a negative impact on small business profits and local shop holder's income. For example, Karachi is the city of Pakistan and it was considered the hub of tourism, but due to bad reporting of media about daily road accidents and target killings nobody wants to visit this city. Therefore, media play an important role in the country's reputation. Most of tv drama is about crime series and a youngster takes interest in it. Media should also focus on the science and technology development made by students of the university so that other students also got encouraged. For example, most of TV dramas are about criminal activities due to which many people in society learn new techniques of crime. Overall, it is necessary to alert the public about crime cases, however talking too much about these cases will have a damaging effect for the public. This essay discussed why the media should not frequently telecast the crime rates and other problems even they should more focus on new development. In my opinion, I completely agree with this proposition that telecasting about problems have a negative impact on people and society.
In
today
's era
media
has
so
much independence than ever
before
.
Media
is
telecasting
negative
side of the society more than
positive
on. In this regard,
some
people
believe that it has a detrimental effect on local communities and community. This essay will discuss why I completely
agree
with this proposition.

News and talk
shows
mainly
focusing on political issues and poor law and order situation of the country due to this
overall
image of the country would damage. Although it is necessary to talk about the basic issues such as political uncertainty and poor
rules
and, regulations,
but
frequently
highlighting these issues will result in a decrease in the number of tourists which have a
negative
impact on
small
business profits and local shop holder's income.
For example
, Karachi is the city of Pakistan and it
was considered
the hub of tourism,
but
due to
bad
reporting of
media
about daily road accidents and target killings nobody wants to visit this city.
Therefore
,
media
play an
important
role in the country's reputation.

Most of tv
drama is about
crime
series and a youngster takes interest in it.
Media
should
also
focus on the science and technology development made by students of the university
so
that other students
also
got
encouraged.
For example
,
most of TV
dramas are about criminal activities due to which
many
people
in society learn new techniques of
crime
.
Overall
, it is necessary to alert the public about
crime
cases,
however
talking too much about these cases will have a damaging effect for the public.

This essay discussed why the
media
should not
frequently
telecast the
crime
rates and other problems even they should more focus on new development. In my opinion, I completely
agree
with this proposition that telecasting about problems have a
negative
impact on
people
and society.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The charts below illustrate the average bed use in three typical hospitals internationally and the proportion of hospital budgets allocated to in-patient care before and after day-surgery was introduced in 2003. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
7
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