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the chart below gives information about Soutland's main exports in 2000, 20. . , and future projections for 2025. v.1

the chart below gives information about Soutland's main exports in 2000, 20. . , and future projections for 2025. v. 1
Telecommuting has become widely popular among the people and escalated tremendously in recent years. People performing their tasks from house have raised significantly in a few nations across the globe. This essay will highlight some benefits and drawbacks of such method of working online from the place they live. To begin with, the tele-working aids in saving valuable time in this fast paced world. In other words, employees could compromise in commuting to and from work, and could deploy such period in executing other activities such as sports, family time, etc. Furthermore, this process of working also allow workers to spend quality time with their families. In today’s contemporary world, divorce is a widespread practice due to misunderstanding as well as communication gap, and such issues could be abated if one could anticipate time and space to their partner. To cite an example, judicial separation of marriages has reduced notably in recent years in India and the survey taken recently stated that the major reason is the mounting number of the masses involving in remote working and anticipating the colossal amount of time with families and their partners. Nevertheless, those people who work from home are distracted easily. Most of the time family members forget that the person is working and disturb them repeatedly which makes working difficult. Moreover, this trend will make people lazy and result in suffering from various diseases such as obesity, diabetes, heart problems, etc. For instance, health problems have increased tremendously because of the sedentary lifestyle people follow and working from their house means such individuals will not perform any exercises at all and has an opportunity to stay in the same place for hours and earn money. Therefore, the pitfall of flexible workplace could not be disregarded. In conclusion, whether the advantages of telecommuting outweighs the disadvantages are a debatable issue. However, it depends on the individual to choose such work and manage to handle the downside with several solutions such as exercising regularly and working in a separate space by not allowing anyone to enter even if at home.
Telecommuting has become
widely
popular among the
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people
and escalated
tremendously
in recent years.
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People
performing their tasks from
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house
have raised
significantly
in a few nations across the globe. This essay will highlight
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some
benefits and drawbacks of such method of
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working
online from the place they
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live
.

To
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begin
with, the
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tele-working
aids in saving valuable
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time
in this
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fast
paced world.
In other words
, employees could compromise in commuting to and from work, and could deploy such period in executing other activities such as sports,
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family
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time
, etc.
Furthermore
, this process of
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working
also
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allow
workers to spend quality
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time
with their
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families
. In
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today
’s contemporary world, divorce is a widespread practice due to misunderstanding
as well
as communication gap, and such issues could
be abated
if one could anticipate
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time
and space to their partner. To cite an example, judicial separation of marriages has
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reduced
notably
in recent years in India and the survey taken recently stated that the major reason is the mounting number of the masses involving in remote
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working
and anticipating the colossal amount of
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time
with
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families
and their partners.

Nevertheless
, those
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people
who work from home
are distracted
easily
. Most of the
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time
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family
members forget that the person is
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working
and disturb them
repeatedly
which
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makes
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working
difficult.
Moreover
, this trend will
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make
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people
lazy and result in suffering from various diseases such as obesity, diabetes, heart problems, etc.
For instance
, health problems have increased
tremendously
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because
of the sedentary lifestyle
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people
follow and
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working
from their
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house
means such individuals will not perform any exercises at all and has an opportunity to stay in the same place for hours and earn money.
Therefore
, the pitfall of flexible workplace could not
be disregarded
.

In conclusion
, whether the advantages of telecommuting
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outweighs
the disadvantages are a debatable issue.
However
, it depends on the individual to choose such work and manage to handle the downside with several solutions such as exercising
regularly
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
working
in a separate space by not allowing anyone to enter even if at home.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay the chart below gives information about Soutland's main exports in 2000, 20. . , and future projections for 2025. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
346 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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